the truth but in lies.

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:48 am

thank you

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:52 am

your welcome Very Happy

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:21 pm

will edit when i wrote full chapte 7
Chapter 7
the date
time had passed. As 7 came closer. I got dressed up. Even thought Eli disproved. I walked out just in time for Bryan to walk up. “hey” I said. “hi” he said with a smile.

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:53 am

(full chapter 7)

Chapter 7
the date
time had passed. As 7 came closer. I got dressed up. Even thought Eli disproved. I walked out just in time for Bryan to walk up. “hey” I said. “hi” he said with a smile. We walked down to his car. I got in on the passenger side of his car. “so where we going” I asked. He smiled as he got in. “to the park” he said. It was alittle scary that we were going there for one thats where Megan had came after me. “something wrong” he asked automaticly knoticing me being quiet. “its just the park is where Megan had come after me at” I said as I remembered the events earlier today. “oh well you don't have to worry” he said looking over at me. I smiled I felt safe with him. He started driving to the park. Once we got there. We got out and started walking. The park did look amazing at night. It had a certain feel to it at night. The sky was dark blueish, the trees where like dark but calming. After a few mins of walking I took his hand. he looked at me. I looked at him. We had walked to the fountain I sat down and he sat beside me. “can I ask you something” I asked looking at him. “sure” he said. “what are you” I said I felt stupid that I was asking now. But he smiled. “i'm a vampire” he said. So thats why he was abnormally hot. He smiled “so I guess your thinking about me being a vampire” he said. “sorta” I said blushing alittle. He smiled moving closer to me. I didn't stop him. I actually liked it I could feel his warmth. I looked up and him. And he looked down at me. He leaned down and kissed me. I didn't hesitate at all. I kissed him back. He pulled me closer to him as we kissed. I kissed him while moving onto his lap. He moved from my lips to my neck. He kept kissing me on my neck. It felt amazing. I loved his touch. I let out a soft moan. He was making me feel so good. I smiled up at him. He smiled at me as he moved back to kissing my lips. I kissed him back. My cell started vibrating but I ignored it. I didn't want this moment to end not now. I got lost in his kiss in his touch. I knew he felt the same way I did. We stopped kissing just sitting there looking at each other.
“I should answer this”i said pulling out my cell. When I herd Eli's serious voice I listened and didn't talk. “there dead mom and dad are dead” was all he said. I dropped my cell. I stared out away from Bryan. He noticed it right away. “whats wrong” he asked. I could feel the tears start flowing down my cheeks. I put my head in my hands. He put his hand on my shoulder. “there dead” I said. He got closer to me. “who” he asked. “my parents” I said through crying. He walked me over to his car. “I'll take you to your brother if you want” he said. I got in. “ okay” was all I said. He got in and started the car. “do you know where your brother is” he asked. *edit your post and this will go away* I forgot my cell over by the fountain. I got out and ran over to find it. “Eli where are you” I asked. He was waiting for me to get back. “ at the house meet me outside” he said. I hung the cell up and walked back to Bryan's car. It was quiet the ride back home. I looked out the window. How could this happen. Then the thought went through me Megan. It was my fault they were dead. If I hadn't went out with Bryan tonight they would still be alive. When we got there I got out said by to Bryan and walked over to Eli he was standing in the front yard. He obviously had been crying alittle to. “Eli” I said walking up to him. “Jade” he said looking up at me. I sat beside him. “Its all my fault” I said. He looked at me. “its not your fault” he said. “yes it is if I hadn't went out with Bryan tonight they wouldn't be dead. I know it was Megan who did this.” I said my sad turning to anger. She would Pay for this. She killed my parents. I thought through my head. “what are we going to do” I asked. “we are going to have to go to the council it has a few from each race they will help us” he said.

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:32 am

Awesome

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:53 am

thanks/

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:53 pm

No prob please write more as soon as possible

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Tue Jan 25, 2011 6:36 pm

okay i just been having writers block

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:26 am

Oh im sorry. Um try listening to music

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:36 am

part of the next chapter.

Spoiler:

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Thu Jan 27, 2011 6:18 pm

Wow you are great! The plot is amazing and the story between Jade and Bryan is nice. Megan is a total *edit your post and this will go away* by the way!

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Thu Jan 27, 2011 8:34 pm

Oh please write more! this story is really good! i love it.

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:10 am

thanks i've been sorta having writers block but i will get some more written whne i can

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 10:30 am

Chapter 8
the council
“okay” I said I kept the sad look but inside I was pissed. Megan was going to pay. We got up Eli walked over to his motorcycle tossing me a helmet. “ come on” he said getting on I put the helmet on and hopped on behind him. Holding on to him. The ride wasn't that long so I just thought. What would the council be like. I mean it would have alittle from each race. What would they do? All this went through my mind as we zoomed by I looked but everything was sorta blurred for me. I held onto Eli this was the second time I had. I had a weird feeling. But it was good. I needed some good. When we finally got to the council. It was a big building. Like a house but not. We got off Eli's bike and walked in. “can I help you” a small girl walked up she looked younger than me. “yes we need to speak to the council” Eli said the girl nodded gesturing for us to follow. We followed her into a huge room it looked like it could be a ball room if it wasn't for the giant place the the council members sat. once we walked in an old person probably the leader of the council said “what do you to young ones need”. It was I who spoke first. “are parents where killed” I said. “you mean his parents” the leader said. “Leader she doesn't need to know this now” Eli said. “she deserves the truth young one.” the leader said. “what do you mean I deserve the truth.” I asked walking up. “those weren't your parents your parents died long ago” she said. So I wasn't related to Eli or any of them the whole time. “you mean” I asked. “yes your an orphan you always was in a way.” she said. I couldn't deal with this not after all thats happened. So I did what I always had when I couldn't bear thing. I ran. I ran out of the building. Eli had started chasing me. But I ignored him I transformed into my animal from and gained speed. Too bad he was just as fast and caught me. “Jade” he whispered. He had tackled me so I was laying on the ground and he was on top of me. “Eli” I whispered back. We layed there for a few mins. Neither of us talking. When he did something that surprised me. He kissed me. I layed there him kissing me for only a second then I kissed him back. This had felt so right now. As we kissed every bad thing was forgotten just me and him. He moved from my lips down my face to my neck where he kissed me more. I let out alittle moan as he kissed me. I wrapped my arms around his neck pulling his body so it pressed to mine. This was something different something amazing. When I herd the voice. “I'm sorry about your parents.” said a voice that I realized all to well. Megan. I rolled so Eli would get off me. I got up. “What the hell are you doing here” I said more demanding the answer. “i know you think I did it” she said. “i don't think I know” I said. She looked at me. Then I noticed her. I mean really noticed her. She was all bloody and beat up. “what happened” I asked. I hated this fact about myself but even when I hate someone I don't like to see them beat up so I feel alittle bad for them. “i had gone over to your house to apologize for earlier when I herd the screams I broke down the door and tried to stop them but they got me and did this” she said. “why should I believe you” I said. “why would I look like this for one and why/ how could I kill your parents.” she said. “simple they put up a fight and your an evil *edit your post and this will go away*” I said. She looked really hurt by what I had said. “fine don't believe me” she said running off. I had started to run off after her. “don't fall for her act” he said. I looked down at him. “ I don't think this one is an act” I said running after her. I had caught up to her she was sitting on a bench alone. “Megan” I said as I walked up. She looked at me. She was obviously crying. I could tell she wasn't lieing about what she had just said to me. “ I'm sorry” I said sitting beside her. She looked at me again. “i knew you wouldn't believe me” was all she said. “well I do believe you” I said. We sat there in silence for a few mins. “i'm sorry I couldn't stop them” I said. “you did what you could” I said to her. I don't know how I could be so nice to her. “i know you think I was being a *edit your post and this will go away* because I wanted Bryan thats not why I knew he was trouble” she said. What did she mean by trouble? “what do you mean” I asked. “you don't think its a coincidence that the night you go out with him something bad happens to your family. I think he was aimed more at getting rid of Eli but lucky Eli wasn't there” she said. She was making compete sense. I mean it was Eli that had talked me into not going out with Bryan tonight. Thing were getting so confusing lately. I mean Megan isn't a compete *edit your post and this will go away*, Bryan is Evil, and I think i'm falling for Eli. Things just couldn't get any worse could they.

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 5:45 pm

OMG i lOve it

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:49 pm

lol thanks i was thinking why not add a twist Razz

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:56 pm

Twists are pretty sweet

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:58 pm

ya and it gives me more to write i mean i think oh what if she was nice or what if this happens or so on and ya

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:23 pm

Yea tottaly

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:47 pm

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:56 pm

You have talent to write, it´s amazing =)

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:27 pm

thanks its not that good and neither am i at writing.

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:31 pm

It´s really good, actually =)

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:12 pm

thanks =)

Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:36 pm

Pleez write more

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