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gamer
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sat Jan 29, 2011 7:50 pm | |
| i will when i stop hasing this writer block  | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sat Jan 29, 2011 8:00 pm | |
| Maybe try scribbling down like thoughts and ideas even if they make no scense | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sat Jan 29, 2011 10:53 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sat Jan 29, 2011 11:40 pm | |
| I talk to an actual author and i think she said that to help with writers block | |
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Midnight Demon
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 27
Posts : 23496
Location : Take a guess ; )
Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet
Name: Rosalina
Age: 15
Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:47 am | |
| i can't wait to see what happenes next. hope you write more soon. | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:59 am | |
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samjie156
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 16577
Location : Behind you
Join date : 2010-11-23
Character sheet
Name: Samjie
Age: 14
Affinities : Earth, Can see your soul looking at your eyes
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:22 pm | |
| When I have to write pharagraphs or another things for homeworks, to get some inspiration listening to music helps me =) and I actually get good ideas. | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:13 pm | |
| thanks i do that sometimes | |
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samjie156
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 16577
Location : Behind you
Join date : 2010-11-23
Character sheet
Name: Samjie
Age: 14
Affinities : Earth, Can see your soul looking at your eyes
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:47 pm | |
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ZOEY AND STARK FOREVER
Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 26
Posts : 680
Location : And why do you need to know??? Stalker much!!!
Join date : 2010-11-03
Character sheet
Name: Alexandera( alex for shortz(or ally)
Age: 16
Affinities : vision, can see the dead, & can tell if someone is lieing
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:30 pm | |
| this is great keep writin the story. can't wait for more. | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:54 pm | |
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AMAR high preistess
Seeing the Tracker
Age : 29
Posts : 10
Location : at school after school
Join date : 2011-02-04
Character sheet
Name: Kailista (Kai)
Age: 17
Affinities : Fire earth air water spirit control of the under world and it's powers
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:34 pm | |
| wow thats actually very nice story line and good chracters i like i look foward to read more of it when u write more to it | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:54 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:56 pm | |
| So u still got writers block | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:58 pm | |
| well not really i just havent had the time to write | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:00 pm | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:51 am | |
| Chapter 9
what feelings to follow
the news that Eli wasnt my brother. and Bryan might be evil. did shock me. even more Megan wasnt a *edit your post and this will go away*. we stayed at the Council place. till the next day were we went to school. as i walked in i couldnt help but think about Eli. when i ran into Bryan. "oh.... Bryan... uh" i said sounding really stupid. "Jade i was thinking mabey we should try to give yesterday another try tonight" he said walking with me. "um okay sure" i said even though i knew i shouldn't. "great" i said putting an arm around me as we walked to first block. i felt slutish. i mean im sorta kinda dating Bryan. but i have feelings for Eli too. when we got to my class first. Bryan Kissed me. i kissed him back for a second pulling away. "Bryan" i said looking at him. "Jade you'll feel better tonight on are date" he said with a smile walking away. i walked into class where i was bombareded with questions by (freinds name here i forgot and will fix when i find it.). "yes we kissed and yes were going out again tonight" i said. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:16 am | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:17 am | |
| thank you  | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 11, 2011 9:20 am | |
| Your welcome | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:06 am | |
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samjie156
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 16577
Location : Behind you
Join date : 2010-11-23
Character sheet
Name: Samjie
Age: 14
Affinities : Earth, Can see your soul looking at your eyes
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:32 pm | |
| The story´s getting more interesting  | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:37 am | |
| thanks bad thing i lost the main file of it on my laptop so i has to write it off the top of my head now | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:51 am | |
| "Well Jade thats awesome" Taylor said. "not really" i muttered. she looked at me. "what do you mean" she asked. i whispered to her what all had happened. "you mean you and Eli arent.." she whispered but cut off when the teacher came in. i sat there the whole class. writing notes about the hidden world and its history. but really thinking about Bryan and Eli. everything was getting so cofusing. like which feeling do i follow. who do i trust. and many other things. i was glad when class was over. i got my stuff putting it in my bag. i walked out with Taylor. "wait so you have a thing for Eli know too" she asked as we walked. "yes no i dont know" i said. we walked to are lockers. which convenently were right beside each other. i shoved some books in. "things are just to confusing for me right now" i said as i was shoving new books in my bag. "well that must suck" she said. "hey can i ask something" i asked. "sure" she said looking over at me. "is there something between you and Shawn." i asked. i mean there did seem to be something between them. "umm... welll.... sorta" she said. i looked at her now. "what do you mean by sorta" i asked standing up closing my locker door. "well thing is vampires and werewolfs arnt supose to get along like me and Shawn do" she said as we walked off to are next class. "and that is getting in the way of you guys dating" i asked. "sure is" she said. "why do you let it" i asked. "my father told me i couldnt be anything more than freinds with Shawn." she said looking alittle sad now. "why not sneak around" i asked. "my father has people watching me" she said as we walked. "what do you mean" i asked. "my father is part of the council" she said. | |
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Utopias' Girl
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 14151
Location : In the dark corner with him, who says i have to behave?
Join date : 2009-10-10
Character sheet
Name: Reva
Age: lost track
Affinities : Shadows (Underworld), empath, wolves/bats, writing
| | Subject: Re: the truth but in lies. Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:33 pm | |
| no, i did not read it i took a quick look over it. if you need any help or have questions o'm working on getting something i have written published. PM if you need anything but it look really good. | |
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