written words

Subject: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:25 am

Wedding day

Hand holding out
Feeling mixing in the air
Unsure of what is really going on
breath holds still
Pressure builds up all around

Everything changing oh, so fast
Body shacking
Mind full of thoughts
Eyes begin to burn as it takes in everything around

Feeling sick to the stomach
With just one look
His face so handsome
His voice sweet as if like a lullaby

Everyone staring
Heart pounding
Hand sweaty
Voice unstained
Vows of our own

Waiting for to hear it
Dream of it
Can't wait for it
To be his wife
His lover,
His Everything until death do us part!

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:28 am

I simply love the second last stanza. short and sweet lines that really captures attention and creates a moving picture in your head. Wonderful!

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:30 am

A Battle in Our Mind

We walked into battle, with our head held up high
Our weapon in hand, our thoughts are clear
The sky so clear like an ocean of stars
But not one friendly face, not even a moon to light the way
The animals are quite, no wolf song can bring a comfort to me
We know the blood will pour onto the land
But we stand our ground, for we know...
There will be no win for us or them tonight!
Many think that we are caught in two different worlds
But I close my eyes hope that this is nothing but a dream
That old songs is wrong... for life is not a dream but a game,
A game in which we all play, a game of chaste...
No one can be sure who will win this game we play
Attack this life before us, makes the battle wreath winning
So we ran into battle, with our head held up high,
With weapon in hand, our mind clear of thoughts...
***
The sky glows as the flames burn into the day light
The once green grass is now red with blood
People cries for the lost ones, I stand confused
Did we win or lost.
So many gone, too many new wounds
Too more new wounds
A lot more to be forgotten, but now I think back...
Were we really readily for this or not, so much is unclear
for the ones that fell were they afraid or too weak to go on?
NO!
I can't believe that, for our flame were bright.
And our sprit was high and readily for the fight
the flames dim, will we last much longer or will we fade away?
And the next group will come and take our place?
I will not let that happen, I will die fighting.
I'll not fade way and be forgotten...
So, it begins!

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:32 am

Cruel Man in my thoughts
Flame burn high aginst the sky
I stand there and watch
as the screams come from all around me.
The pain of that place seemed to be gone
yet those eyes still burn under my skin
still under his command
Weak as he stair over at me.
The Flames build like hatred
why do I still stand my ground around him?
Hands shack as the news come in
what is going to happen now?
Alone with him...
Why didn't she get out...?
I looked over at him.
He smiles a cruel smile
Trapped like a little rat
under his orders I must stay
the flames die...
Were do you go to pick up your pieces...
Of an already broken life
a life that was never whole before.
A sigh come over him.
A tear from those cold eyes come down...

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:35 am

Believe or not to believe

Unsure why I sit here and worried
there is something more to do
Action is the way to go...
So they say.
But so many have moved us by just sitting down
And not letting their belief change
Because of what they say or do
I stand and FIGHT!
Time for worried is over
Let my voice ring from the mountain tops
I want to reach out to the hurt and forgotten warriors
Why do he forsakes his work?
If he cared about us there would be anything’s different!
Waiting for sounds of yelling about how great he is...
I stand there and waited but no one called out
for this great thing they believe in...
Angles seemed to be forgotten here
and demons come to play...
I care not for I fear the end is near
I will not let my belief die.
It is written in a book...
Under my bed.
So do I really believe in my own words
or Am I as fake as anything can be?
Believe is to believe in something that you may not see...
Or does it mean of something else.
I can see many things but does not mean I believe in them all...
I am just lost and confuse...
So many as said this to me.
I am not sure what I am or even who I am....
SO I can't really say what I believe in... Can I?

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:38 am

Wow.. Amazing... It just drew me into it right till the last word!

Though the constant repeating of "clear" and "play" does cause a little boredom, but the story that it tells really makes one forget the repetition.

Wonderful lines:

"That old songs is wrong... for life is not a dream but a game,
A game in which we all play, a game of chaste..."

"The sky glows as the flames burn into the day light
The once green grass is now red with blood"

"So many gone, too many new wounds"

This part is the best:
"NO!
I can't believe that, for our flame were bright.
And our sprit was high and readily for the fight
the flames dim, will we last much longer or will we fade away?
And the next group will come and take our place?
I will not let that happen, I will die fighting.
I'll not fade way and be forgotten...
So, it begins!"

The word "No!" shocks you and brings you back to reality, and allows you to take a breath before you drown in the story.

Wonderful!

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:41 am

Unsure
The sound in your head
like a bad song
there is a taste from yesteryears
they all lead you to the one moment that you worked so hard to forget about it.
The hate that fallen on your heart
Pieces crashing down around you

Screaming and crying...
So love and hate comes in hand and hand
past come flooding down over you

you forget it all...
Let it go
close your eyes and fall into the darkness

Moon Clan...

Screaming at her...
Not knowing what would happen next.
The dark was always around her.
I never knew what she was really going to do.

Her scream still in my ears
giving her life for mine
she had done something I don't think I could do.
Crying over the body

Slipped blood on my hands.
Never letting myself forget her...
The pain will always be there
Right here in my heart.

Her time was so short
with a friendship that couldn't be killed.
A good soul gone
Because of my hatred

yet she saved my life
When I disorder her.
How could she do it?
I don't think I would have done it if it was the other way around.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:42 am

the last two poems are a little dark, it's difficult to read.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:44 am

fixed should be easer to read now. sorry about that and thank you for telling me.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:47 am

Dear you,

Can you hear my voice in the dark light?
You were once everything to me.
I stayed up for hours on in just thinking about you.
Now look at us...
We can barely stand each other....
The love is gone and it turned to hate?
The night of our passion die...
I thought I was going to be broken forever!

Here I am standing stronger than you!
I see your pain and I tried to help you....
Though you are too long gone...
The darkness has token you....
The Flame of Trust has died out.
Shadow play on your face
I feel sorry for you my old friend....
Can you hear my voice in the darkest of night?

My dear friend can you be a bigger fool
the one that you wanted had been right in front of you...
You broke her heart and now it done.
The darkness has eaten you in your room.
You are not the same as
you were when we were young
the playfully-ness has fade from your blue eyes.

Once friend now Enemies of the ages.
It breaks my heart that you have gone down a path
that no one can save you from.
Can you hear MY VOICE... in your own sorrow?

I have tried to help you
but you turned away from me.
Just because I speak the truth.
Well I hate that you are hurting....
But you have chosen your path....
I can only say I hope that you have a nice life in your soworville.

From your old friend that is sorry that she can't do anything more to help you,
JP.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:51 am

Hot Vamp Boy
Looking around and let out a sigh
He so damn hot yet I can't have him....
He belongs to her...
I belong to him.
Lost in this world of ours
Love it sucks.
Yet I let myself fall for him...
I tried to close myself from the world
but the walls can't hold him out.
I want him so bad
there is a taste in my mouth that I can get rid of.
Blood runs down the lips of love that can't be

Looking back now
The unknown is what we fear.
What could had happened
Or what could had been.
I had thought over the What If of my life.
I am happy
that I took the path I did.
Look at me.
I am standing on everything I wanted...
Well mostly.
I am 21 and I am a woman
that is all I really know.
So what people in past has *edit your post and this will go away* up.
And left out of my life
I just think that I could have been just like them.
Say that I know everything... I know what is real and what is not.
Though Even now my life seem like a dream.
That I don't want to wake up from
I am happy.
I found people that like me for me.
I don't have cover my face and act different

I have learned that I hated the person
that I was allowing myself to become.
The wounds opened deeply as the more that I acted like her.
Now that the dusty old cover is off
I can see the woman that I want to see.
I don't have to live in the shadow of her.
I can say that this smile is true blue.
Corky I know.
Random thoughts come in and out
just to say that I had done something right today.

The further is still unknown
I do not fear it
I in embrace it
with warm open arms.
I have been through hell before.
Why not just one more time
for old time sake?
So bring your best shot
and let the rain and blood pour!

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:53 am

The last two poems is a little hard to read without the rhythm. Esp with the last line of "Moon Clan". Otherwise, the poem is good. The last line is too long, maybe you could split it into two lines?

Believe or not to Believe is well-written. I love the lines, "let my voice ring from the mountain tops", "I care not for I fear the end is near", "Believe is to believe in something you may not see" and "I'm not sure what I am or even who I am".

Beautiful works. And I'm serious about it.

Among all the 6 poems, I love "The battle in our mind" the most.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:55 am

<3 these two part:
"The unknown is what we fear.
What could had happened
Or what could had been."

"I have been through hell before.
Why not just one more time
for old time sake?"

So sweet ^^ <3

Wish I could write as well as you do! You really are fit to be the poet of the prefect circle!

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:56 am

I don't like makeing rhyms in my poems like you do. I just let the words flow and hope that they fit.
Thank you but I don't feel like I am really a good poet

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:58 am

New Season of Life and Home
Holding breath as they started to come my way
how much more can I take?
The yelling and benign forgotten
in the hell of life

Holding on to something that is not there
Dreaming of the days
When it all fallen apart.
Head are rolling
Hands out for something more

Hand shacking Fall night
believing in something fake
Wasted time Winter day
bowing down again...
blood boiling Summer evening
no more of laying down
Yelling again Spring braking
Time to fight yet again

Hate started to rise
Couldn't waited anymore
For someone to save me for this
Hell that I was put in
I am done...

Blood runs down my arm
Eyes started to glow
Wings are broken
Unsure what is going to happen.
Randomly hitting things

Hand shacking Fall night
believing in something fake
Wasted time Winter day
bowing down again...
blood boiling Summer evening
no more of laying down
Yelling again Spring braking
Time to fight yet again

fight or die...
That is what they say
I don't think it could just be that.
Holding on to something that I am sure is even there

I open my hand and it was nothing there
Just air... and dust
I looked up and started to cursing
this Fake world that I must live in.
What is there more that I could do
Change it?

Hand shacking Fall night
believing in something fake
Wasted time Winter day
bowing down again...
blood boiling Summer evening
no more of laying down
Yelling again Spring braking
Time to fight yet again

The time is done and gone
I was a fool
Believe in something so fake as this room.
I look around it and see nothing but lost and unsure

Wishing to be somewhere else knowing that it was gone
there was no way getting it back.
Wasted time of my life
looking up at the sun and smile
as dust dance around me

I am fine...
I have found home.
A new life...
In a place all new
Holding to my own soul
As I walk around
in this forgotten place.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 1:59 am

To My Grandma
Full moon rise
and the one that I could go to is gone
She was tooken away from me so long ago.
I wish that she didn't go...
But a warrior knows when the fight is done.
I know that she is looking down at me and smiling at me
Know that she was proud of me...
I wish she could see me get married...
See her great grandchildren from me...
Sprites hear my call...
Let her know that I miss her and still love her.
Thought I don't understand why she went away.
I just wish I could had gone back and told her
that I loved her one last time.
To tell her good night once more
to give her a kiss before I walked away
to tell her that I will miss her
Say that I hated to see her lying in that bed.
She didn't really talk... for she was so drugged for the pain...
Just little movement to tell us that she was still there...
a little bit of blood that no one wanted to wash off her face.
I wish that I could go back...
Spend more time with her
to show her that she could be proud of me...
Just to hear her voice again...
And it would really be her... not just a voice in my head.
For her warm and comforted hugs.
For her cookies at the Christmas time,
to see her health one more time
to see her wings that no one but me could see...
She was my angle... She guild me for so long
She knew how to make the hurt go away.
She was the peace keeper for the family.
She was Grandma Woolsey
You love her but yet knew better then to make her mad.
She passed back in 2003 or 2004... I am not sure.
I love her with all my heart.
I missed her more than anything from my past.
This is for you Grandma!

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 2:01 am

Zoey Redbird
Sticks that smell
Eyes that follow
Heart that broken
Past that remain
The hollow tree that sings it song
Wind that howls in the night
Fire that burns the soul
Rivers that flows forever
Children laughter that melts the hate
Embrace that you don't understand
Learn for what has happen
Do the will of The Goddess and Sing in her name.
Hand shacks
Tears fall
forget me knots.
Whispers in the air
what more can one asks of thee?
Love strikes
a web that can't be tamed
stand alone the chosen
Voices of the betrayed
Marked to change into something else.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 2:07 am

Shadowy Lovers
Because I love you...,
Sitting here holding back my tears
does you not care that I am here waiting for you?
I feel like you look right through me like I am not even there.
Words that go unspoken
a day that waste away
So much on my mind ...
That I wanted to tell you...
You look right through me again...
My voice disappeared.
My love for you still there
as my body seemed to fade in time
I sit here like a shadow on the wall.
I want to scream and yell
yet I have no voice to be heard
I am your shadow...
And I love you.
This time I have fade away
and there is not coming back.
I am the love shadow that no one sees.

A-Hole
Open your ears and listen to things around you.
You think everyone loves you.
You throw your head up high like you are something.
I look at you and laugh.
You have this thing about you...
You think that you the shits.
I can smell you from right here.
You think that you are Billy bad a$$...
You can take anyone down if you wanted to...
Well big little boy come and try it.
Pulling me away from everyone just to stand there and have nothing to do...
I am here to work...
I would never think of you as anything but sh!t!
Just look at you...
Your hair looks greasy
your teeth are ding with your mouth.
These eyes of your full with hate
you smell like last weeks old trash...
You think that all women should be at home doing house work...
And lay down at that a man wish...
I couldn't do that.
I strong
I got too much free will than you know.
I would never let a man talk down at me.
I am happy with the one I am with.
SO bring thing...
Because you will burn
when you mess with me.
I will stand there and laugh as you go down.
I can be as cold as anyone around here.
So just try it.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 2:07 am

It's not rhyme that I'm talking about I'm talking about the rhythm. the number of syllabus. It's a little off cause those before it has about 5-7 and it has more than 11.

Don't put yourself down, you write great! *hugs* (=

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 2:09 am

I check back again later... You've too many. My head is whirling with all the emotions and the images from so many poems. I'll take a break first lol. Or else I'll pop.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:15 pm

Mother
Late at night and I know I should be lying down...
But this was swinging in my head.
Hand holding out waiting for a touch
Lips wanting to be kissed
Body that dance around
Hoping that someone was watching.
A dream that never dreamed
Oh how the Fate wheels do turn...
A mess in my mind,
wishing to have a bottle at my side.
So this duel blade can't hurt me anymore.
The screams of Hell seemed to ring in my ears.
Slamming doors was my lulbays.
Safely in my bed as the screaming coming from down the hall...
Why can't they just play nice?
It just because of me,
or her face?
I started to fake a smile...
Hoping that no one could see these tears...
They all have a name from Hate to Lust.
What can come of this world...?
When a child still waiting for something more...
And then grow up still waiting?
Faces fading in and out
as a dream die with all hope
Cussing and tears
Bitterness in her face...
Why did she hate me so...?
They say that we would not make it...
Just look at us now!!!
Living up in our own place...
The ups and downs bring us one step closer to what we want.
They say that we can hide everything from the world...
Not true... The eyes are doorways into our souls.
It tells on us....
Mena with the dream of you and only you
in this time of wasting away knowing there is nothing better to do.

So write down and know that it is coming soon.
The end of us all...
Though it can't be written or set in stones...
Oh great things will come in times...
Can we say we saw it coming?
I think not... things just happen
some spining us out of control
Making it impossible to stop.
Take in a breath and wait for the hit
everything falling down around us.
Screaming and yelling as we call.
Wishing that we could take it all back
well here it goes.

I AM NOT SORRY FOR WHO I AM!
I CAN'T STAND HERE AND BE WHAT YOU WANT ME TO BE
I AM WHO I AM
THE GIRL IN THE BACK OF THE ROOM WAITTING
FOR IT TO ALL FALL APART AS THEY LIVE THEIR LIVES AS IF
NOTHING COULD HURT THEM.
WHILE EVERYTHING HURTED ME.
I AM NOT SORRY FOR WHO I AM!
I CAN'T BE WHO YOU WANT ME TO BE MOTHER.
I HAVE MY LIFE BACK...
SO LEAVE ME BE MOTHER.
JUST KNOW THIS... I STILL LOVE YOU.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:05 pm

Is this Me?
Looking in the morrow
who is this girl looking a back at me.
She looked like a person that knows who she is.
I know it not me...
I am not sure what life is really out there for me.
Yet she has my eyes and my hair.
It my faces there looking back at me
what is there that I don't see?
Have I really missed what made me?
What do I really want out of life...
Lost of what could be learned.
Breaking under the paths that I could take

Marry Meet!
Cast out this wish of good will into the Night
to My friends a far
Bless us as we cast this circle tonight.
Guide us to keep us with the light
So that we may not stray from the good around us.
May our light cast to those who has nothing
as we have everything a home to our friends
Even though they are miles away.
Let our light shine bright
to bring us together.

Ancestors
Ancestors hear my cry.
Guild me in the ways of the old
So that I may find away to something more
Let my heart be filled with the words of the old.
Let me know what I should do.
Show me how to listen to the earth and everything around me.
Let me know how to live with the earth and not just on it.
Let me see animals as brothers and sister than enemy.
Clean my spirit and let me be as one of your brethren.
Oh Great Ancestors let me hear the words of the Great Sprit above us.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:07 pm

Trying to make it Work
I scream...
I beg...
I just want you to see...
How much it hurts when you say that I should not do this...
Though you do the same damn thing!
I been trying to better... for both of us...
Is that not good enough to you...
The mind grows dead as the more Soup moves.
My voice dies under the typing of the keys.
My heart brakes under your silent.
I hate that it has took over everything.
I cry
I brake...
Under everything you seem to tell me that I should do it.
It cuts deeper than anyone could think of.
WOW is the only world it seemed that you want to be a part of...
It makes me sick inside...
Just push the best thing that has happened to you...
I want to know why do, I always get the short stick of things.
I work on the house but you sit there as if there nothing else to do...
Got to get to level 80...
I just wanted a kiss and yelling is all I get...
I just killed you again...
Sh!t happens I guess...
I hate this new world that you have fallen in love...
And everyone wonders why I don't do what I should be doing
It does it seem to have no point in it...
Call me a baby...
I don't care anymore...
I don't know why I stay....
I love you but it seem like you have found a new love of your life....
Blow me off like I am nothing but just like the others....
Why am I always compared to the ones that hurt you...
Have I really hurt you that much???
Should I just go?...
I don't want to ... I am happy ... I am confused...
I am everything rolled up in one...
Just keep making me feel like I am nothing to you...
I thought I was your everything...

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:09 pm

Hate her
I hate her!!....
Tears in my eyes
she token over my mother...
If she does not want something then
my mom stop everything she said that she was going to do
one day that I wanted my mom around...
She not even really going to be there
let me out of this hell that ...
I wanted nothing from that *edit your post and this will go away*....
They are always there for my sister
now the only time I am ever going to get married.
They don't even what to be there....
They were there for my sister 2 failed married.
And the one that I am going to have is going to last more than they will ever know...
And they don't want to be there to love me and be happy for me....
Well I say F... her.
F...her wife.
I am nothing to them... so f... her.

Subject: Re: written words Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:10 pm

Ready or Not I Do Be Wed!
Roll up your sleeves time to get messy.
Holding in one last breath as the sweat rolls down your face
it time to fight yet again.
To show the world what you are made of.
Time to yell and scream
show the world your true colors.
Bumps and scrapes are going to keep you down.
They can tie you and call you names.
Throw the stones at your bones.
They may bent and brake
yet you still stand there with your head held high
you are tired of being pushed around
Tired of been tell who you can love.
Who you can be
they don't like you from start
so why would they like you if you change
everything you are or going to be?
With the voices in your head tell you...
' Not give up to their domains.
The sun will set on them one day...
Everything will not change from the get go.'
The pops of bones as the steel clap like thunder!
Blood pour like the rain as it falls to earth.
Vision blurs with each wing and hit you take.
You can't let them win.
You will forever be the crazy girl under their belts and chains.
Holding your breath and wishing to be what they want is not going to free you.
Just sit you in their hold better.
Don't let them win.
Let the Thunder ring your name to all that will hear it!
Push your body from the ground
and show that smile that they hate to see!
Laugh at every hit they give you.
Smile every time they scream at you.
Just know that you are YOU!
Nothing going to change that!
Your heart leads you to your freedom.
Scream to the Mountain tops
WITH THIS RING I BE WED!!!!!
Nothing can stop you now!
Your heart is true to his
and his to yours.
Let everything else die behind your shadows
and embrace your new future with him.
Let the rain come down
Let the Thunder scream your name
Let Earth die with you.
Let the water wash away the pain of the past
Let the fire burn into your passionate future!
Let your spirit show you the way to your new found life!
Let the rest be forgotten under your steps.
I DO!
Now I am Mrs. Chwarczinski and now no one can take it all away from me

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