Amber Rae's Poetry

My first poem


Why do u yell at me?
Why do u say u care?
Why do u think ill forgive you?
Why do i forgive you?
What does that mean to you?
I ask myself this every time we fight,
I ask these when one of us messes up.
Why do this to our selves?
I know why because people who love forgive,
and remember the good times.
The only good time with you is when you aren't there
Dedicated to my ex-girlfriend

Ouch. oh, you're bi? your profile says you're a girl. or have you not changed that yet?
or did you mean ex-boyfriend? ><
Okay i prod too much. sorry about it.

well what a thing to write for a FIRST poem! Know what I wrote for my first poem man!
a random, defying gravity and overcoming everything kinda poem.

and you're young. you still have a long way ahead of you. one fall is nothing really, you would have forgotten it by the time you go out to work.

but i like that last line 'the only good time wti you is when you aren't there'. I like it. because it's so cruel. so mean. so harsh. and so unfeeling. BUT real.

pretty.

Thanx yes im bi and it okumm and this has happend to me lik 20 times and im just tired of bein treated the same why every time

aww. just a suggestion. not that i've any experience. lol you'd be laughing behind your screen i bet! you've so much experience in love while a person 2 years older than you has none. but anyway, i have none personal experience, but i've seen and heard of friends with such experiences. they take breaks from love and relationships. maybe you can try that. but what makes you want to be in a relationship? maybe you can be happier alone. we were born without our significant other to begin with. so well.. if we try... i suppose we can live without ourselves as our significant other. ><

okay lame thing to say, but you're really young to be in a relationship. when I was 14, although that was only 2 years ago, i only bothered about making friends. lol. nothing near relationships. i see others getting and falling out of love. but who cares, i've my friends and that's all that matters. I still don't really care about love right now. still just plain friendships. i mean, if someone really wants you, he/ she will say it.


btw, i think bi is cool >< not that i'm insulting you. but i mean... it's rare. sorta unique too. and you have to right to be with either gender, and no one will label you 'homo' and give you those dirty looks. actually homo isn't accepted in majority of the world. still get criticized by people. but bi people don't get that (or at least not that I've heard of).

keep writing. i starting writing when i was 11. sparked to write because i was going through a lot. so i hope writing can become your way of relieving stress and expelling the negative thoughts and emotions from within you. make you happier. poetry/songs/stories/novels have that kind of ability to make me happy.

Get well soon --- from your heartache or find someone if you really want to find him/her.

Ger.

Thanx and now i think i have that is an old poem i met someone on this site and i love her and she is good to me so imma try not to loose her.

well. good for you then. i'm just searching frantically for someone to be a good friend of mine.
my thread is pretty dead and quiet. would very much appreciate if you could drop by and leave me a review. (:
i don't like asking for reviews, but they sure do keep me going.
thank you very much in advance!

np

and keep updating . writing, reading and reviewing poetry/songs is my passion, love, drive, motivation and stress relief. thank you if you ever do update.

To my babygirl Mystica

Haring your voice
is like
linsting to the waves
on a beach.
It sooths me to know you are around me
It makes me happy to talk to you
You are the one for me
I love you with all my heart
My one true love

aww that's fast to set!
maybe you should wait a little while. not that i'm discouraging you from feeling complete, whole and happy.
but... i've seen too many fall repeatedly because they get into it too quickly. well you'll probably hate me for saying that... but yeah.. it's just a fact actually... people who fall into the depths of love too quickly will fall out of it after a short while. and that will keep repeating, until they finally succumb to it. and start reflecting and waiting a little longer. sort out thoughts and be selective.

/shrugs/ but what i say is what i say, if it makes you happy, go ahead.

i already wrot that i was waiting till she was pack on to post it

<3 your poems are amazing

thnx babe

anytime <3

love you <3

How tou treat you love relationships

You need help you say

I wached out for you

You say I'm bored

I entertan you

You say I want you

I say you can't have me

You say I love you
I nedd you

I drop what I'm doing
and come to you

I love you I do what I
can........

Dou you want me or love me??

I'm so sorry Michael

I needed you
I loved you
I tried to say sorry
Im done appoligizing
I'm sorry my
brothers hurt you
I'm sorry you feel
as if you can't trust me
But know this
I have always loved you

You can Blame it on me


You can blame
the fighting on me

You can blame
your hurt on me

You can even blame
our brek up on me

But the only person
to blame is you

But ill take it and let you be free of it
Blame all our problems on me.

Im here

Im here waiting for you to
come back to me.

Im here waiting for you to see
she can't love you lik me.

Im here waiting for you to stay with me
but you gone.

So i'm here on my knees begging you not to go
i don't want to be alone


You the only one for me
so I'm here waiting for you.


Now i'm up off my knees telling you "I'm not waing here forever"

I'm done dweling on the past
I wanted to make it last
You've moved on and
I'm alone so
I gess this is good bye
and have a good life
I'll always love you but
You've moved on.

Im over you
I'm done crying
I'm on my own
and I'm done trying
We are friends that is good for me
So lets move on
Completly and entirly
I'm getting a new guy
I hope he treets me better
then you did..

I'm on my way
I'm better
He's nice and funny
Un like you
I'm on my way home
I'm making my path
He is hepling me
Un like you when we wern't
together.

Mistakes are a part of being
human. Appreciate your mistakse
for what they are:
precious lifelessons that can only
be learned the hard way.

When we talk I smile. when u say u love me my hart skips a beat. When you come to see methats when I truly know your mine. And then and only then will I say I love you too.