Amber Rae's Poetry

I like the distinct message you convey across in such little words. hits the nail on the head. and really, they speak for themselves. no masquerades to hide behind. it's just what it reads. and it's beautiful just like that.

Keep writing (:

and sorry i haven't been visiting your thread. i didn't notice because as you can see... i gave up coming about here for quite awhile until yesterday or so.

and you're young to be going through so much (:
do PM me if you want someone to hear you out a'ight? I'm always here (behind my computer screen, when i have time)

Yeah, I haven't gone through any relationships, but i've walked through with many, their love stories. I've seen quite a bit of that side, and maybe these exposure and knowledge i've gathered from their experiences can help you too (:

Thnx now u c y im depressed

wow, that's quite a tad of shortforms. but yeah. i do see. poetry is probably the most transparent form of writing. it exposes not the event but your emotions, to the depths.

yea ... i hate guys!!!!

Dominic/ jast a small part of my life

Im waiting to see you
to talk to you again

but you dont awser

i ask you to be mine
no awnser

I ask if you wanna talk
no awnser

Im waiting but not for long
if you loved me you would awser and be apart of my life

to be continued....

spelling error in the fifth, seventh and last line i think it should be 'answer'and not 'awnser' unless of course you meant for it to read that way, but it does sound weird.
overwhelming hatred and a little of resentment apparent here. Distinct emotions, but a little short of imagery, which makes it a little plain.

My next one is in spanish .... just to give a hint about it .......Cuando te veo mi corazón se detiene y me enamoro de nuevo Int. quiero vivir sin ti Te amo.

i can't understand spanish. sorry :X i suck. i only know chinese and english and limited dialect and malay. i don't know any other languages, but learning korean at the end of the year.

kool

Estoy aquí en tus brazos pensando en él
Estoy con usted, pero yo lo quiero
Me encanta todo y te quiero, pero creo que sobre él
¿por qué no puedo yo olvidar
no lo quiero
no te quiero
voy a tener que a mi enbrace
te quiero es verdad
pero ddont sé si lo quiero?

I loved you and you gave it away like nothing
I am human i feel i love and i cry
I loved with my heart and soul
You loved with your body
I loved with all my might
You loved with all your testaterone
There is a difference between them
I ll alwaays be better then you but ill always love with everyhing in me
You will always "love" with you d!**

You make me happy
you make me smile when im down
you love to say im yours
you arre what my heart desires
i will never hurt you and i
will never leave you we are one in a whole

omg life does suck sometimes but hey i hate when people treat other people like crap. Not me or my girls and boys!!!!

i dont

Show me you love me
show me you care
show me your simpal in my heart
show me your man worth living for
show me you wont hurt me
show me you wont leave
show me your battle scars so i can heal you
Show me you can stay besid me in my life
and care for me at my death bed
Show me youll always find a way to find love in your heart
even tho i made mistakes
show me forgivness
Show me your love.

Thats awesome

Thank iwrot ittomyex who cheated and wants me back....attheend igave him a hint it ain't happning

Thank you sissy i will <3

Amber Rae wrote:

Mistakes are a part of being
human. Appreciate your mistakse
for what they are:
precious lifelessons that can only
be learned the hard way.

This is a very wise thing for a 14 year old to say. You are a very talented writer, sugar. You should keep it up because it will do very good things for you

Thanx allyson and I wrot it from experience I've dated a lot of guy andhalf of them cheated but there was the one that I always went back to unli I learned that. It dosen't matter who the guy is aslong as I'm happy with him and he's good to me and now I've let goofhim and found my true love.

How sweet

I do love him and i would never hurt him and my ex relizes that im happy now

That's good

yep