FallenInLove's poems (please comment)

Nice poems ^^ You sure do write alot ^^! I love them ^^ and its also nice to reflect on ur life and use ur feelings thats what poems are all about =3 Keep it up =D!

Thank you

Here is a couplet :

Love is the feeling I have towards you,
Love is a color anything but blue

that is true XD love it =3

yes it is, another short poem :

Loving you,
Is the only thing I want to do.
I see you agree,
Because you just asked me out,
once more.

Wow your so fast at creating poems D: i use to be able to make peoms but i cant anymore =/ i can only make depressing ones =/

Most of mine are, I only put the happy ones on here, and when I write poems I go into a trance and I typically don't have a clue what i am typing or writing :/

Oh like Kreisma from HON? I dont think i spelled her name right XD

yeeah a bit. and idkk howto spell it either, so no worries

I know my writing isn't that well,
But you know,
What people thiks doesn't matter,
I am me,
And my poems are my forte.

Forte,
The loudness in music,
Music,
My second most favorite thing,
My favorite thing;
Loving you <3

Good

thanks


Slippers

Purple and Gray,
Filled with memories,
Memories of Talent show,
Memories of getting distracted,
Memories of getting them thrown at me,
Memories of you

Just found my old poetry book from middle school )

For My Brother,

You may get on my last nerve,
Hurt me,
Call me names,
Bug me to no end,
Wake me up at 7 am,
Keep me up late,
But hey, isn't that exactly what,
A little brohter is for?

I may tell you my secrets,
You might say you'll never tell,
But you end up telling anyway.
You may tell me your secrets,
I swear on my life,
That I'll never tell,
And I never do,
That's what big sisters are for.

A little brother will;
Rat you out,
Keep you up half the night,
Wake you at the crack of dawn,
Be nosey in your business,
Come to you in a time of need,
Cry in front of you when in pain,
And then be messing with you the next moment.

A big sister will;
Ignore your flaws,
Cry with you,
Give you advice,
Keep your secrets,
Get angry at you,
Then regret it,
And pick on you back.

I'll get you off the bus,
Help you with your homework,
Play with you out back,
Teach you how to seing,
Tend to you when you fall,
Get you up,
Brush off your knees,
And get you on your way.

You never have to say Thank-You,
Or I love you,
Atleast not TOO often.
I knwo how you feel,
I'm your sister,
Do the Math!
Big sisters know best.
Weather your sad or over joyed.

Through thick and thin,
Through love and hate,
Heart break,
Hunger,
Boredum,
Anger,
And any other emotion,
I'll be there for you.

You'll comfort me the best you can,
I know this to be true.
We're closer then we appear,
As brother and sister,
We share a bond,
No one sees it.
We may fight,
But we love each other all the same.

As I start to run,
Out of things to say,
More hits me!
We watch movies together,
Cry at all the sad parts.
We read together,
Making up a story of our own.,
Using only the pictures.

My favorite thing that we do together,
Laugh.
Laughing at jokes,
Laughing at noises we make,
Sounds we hear,
Each other,
Words we say,
And basically everything.

I love you my dear brother,
Forever,
No matter what,
I'll love you 'til the end,
And more after.

I loved you before you talked,
I loved you before you walked,
I loved you since before you were born.

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My First Track Meet

"Ready,"
I get into position,
"Set,"
I lean forward slightly,
"Go" you hear over the BAM!
I jet off,
Patter, Pitter,
My feet hit the ground.
The hurdle approaches,
I jump and land, step, step,
Jump and land, step, step,
Jump and land, step, step,
Jump and land, larger step,
Jump, land, step, step,
Jump and land,
Sprint to the finish,
The faces stare,
My friends cheer,
I just beat the school record,
For 55 meter hurdles.
6 hurdles,
55 meters,
6.5 seconds,
Yet still,
I am not qualifying,
But I don't care,
I won my first race,
Of my first track meet.


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I have pleanty more, but my hands are tired of typing (x

Summer
Warm, Loveable
Caring, Laughing, Playing
Pool, Beach, Snow, Mountains
Depressing, Slipping, Falling
Cold, Hateful
Winter

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Need You

Babe, I need you,
I can't breathe,
Can't live,
Can't be myself,
Hun, I need you.

Without you,
My worl' 'tis a crumblin'
The clouds are a rollin'
The rain 'tis a pourin'
I am a needin' you.