Heaven and Hell on Earth

Wow. I never thought anyone would actually like it.

Haha, I realized.

Ummm, nice story. And-- And! I got out today, so yeah hi.

lol hi!

Hi lol. I never thought anyone would like my story either. I guess i was wrong too.

I think almost everyone does.

Yup. Nobody ever thinks they're great when they really are.

Eh. Very true.

Hi Butterfly, just wanted to let you know I liked your story. How about the title "Heaven and Hell on Earth"

:O! I love it! Thanks soo much!

You're welcome. Will you be posting more soon?

Cool new title. I like it. I freaked out though cause i couldnt find your story in the list. Hope you post more soon!

I'm sorry. I will be posting more soon. I can'tdo much on weekdays. I have to babysit, cook, do homework, and much more. Anyway, thanks for the support!

Sorry I haven't posted in a while. I've had a lot to deal with and didn't have the heart to write so I focused on the RPs . Things are getting better and worse at the same time. So I might be slower than I was before in posting chapters. Anyways, here goes.

Chapter 7:
It almost looked as if he were afraid to speak so he just nodded. Eh, I must be interpreting things, anyway, I have other things to deal with. "But, but, how? Why?" I asked, a little brethless. I couldn't believe the man I had tried so hard to not marry was here, and I actually liked him.
"Once I heard you were gone, I was happy. I didn't want to bein an arranged marriage. I thought it was stupid and unjust. But that was before I knew the truth. Andonce I knew, I had to come find you. I confronted God and begged him to let me come to you."
"You still didn't answer the second part of the question. Why me? Why am I worth giving up Paradise?" I was shocked at what was hearing. I was so NOT good enough for anyone to give up Paradise. Especially for an almost king to give up Paradise for.
"Oh, I guess your parents didn't tell you either.Arranged marriages don't just happen because people want them to happen. They are actually very rare. I was born into a ruling family, therefore being the next king. I had the ability to choose anyone I wished to marry me, that it, until you were born.There was a connection between us instantly. We not only belonged together but with out us heaven would fall. So they made sure that we would find each other and come together. You see how I just let you in? You can do that too if you let your guard down. That's why I came. I needed to be with you." He explained this slowly, I needed that. I was lost.
"But I was gone. Why would you ruin your status by getting yourself banished?"
"You really don't get it do you? With out you, I had no purpose in Heaven. I could never love another after knowing that. So what's the point of living in Paradise if you have no one to live it with?" He had a point there. But this was all so new to me. After what I did, I didn't think I deserved anyone. Let alone probably the nicest and most eligible bachelor in Heaven. I sighed and pulled back. I walked over to the wall and put my head in my hands, leaning against it. I heard him come closer but refused to look up."What's wrong," he asked me gently.
"I feel terrible. If I hadn't tried to get out of our arranged marriage I wouldn't have made all this happen. I wouldn't have been with Dredmont. I wouldn't have created these demons. I wouldn't have been banished. You wouldn't have had to be banished. And Heaven wouldn't fall. This is all my fault." I slid down. Pulling my knees to my chest and resting my head on them. It was true. I was so selfish!
"Are you kidding? I was trying equally as hard to get out of our marriage. And even if you weren't with Dredmont he would have still been evil and would have done what he did. They didn't get banished because of you. You were just in the wrong place at the wrong time with the wrong guy. And Heaven might not fall. They didn't exactly say how or when it was going to so we might still have time."
"Have time for what? I was banished!" He smiled at me then. Showing his gleaming white teeth and fangs.
"Have time to unbanish you."
"What do you mean?"
"You'll see. Now, would you please stop feeling sorry for yourself. I will escort you home for the night." I smiled up at him. He was so sweet. I can't believe I didn't want to marry him! I sighed. No use in living in the past. It's time to move forward. I stood up and took his hand.
"Thank-you" I whispered. He slung his arm around me.
"Anytime." We walked in silence. It wasn't oneof those awkward silences though. It was the peaceful kind that you culd almost hear birds singing in. OK, that was an exageration. I mean, we were in the city after all. We reached my apparmtent building. I tunred toward him, "Where are you staying?"
"Where I have ever since I started looking for you."
"You mean you've stayed in one place this whole time?"
"Yep."
"Where's that?"
"On the streets."
"Are you kidding?"
"Nope."
"Come on in. I will not leave you in the streets. If they se you they will kill you."
"They can't. I am much stronger than them since I was voluntarily banished."
"I don't care. Your staying with me." He sighed but listened anyway. Smart man. I never give up till I win, I guess he already knew that. I unlocked my door andpointed to my bedroom. "You can take the bed, I'll sleep on the couch."
"Nonsense. I'll sleep on the couch. This is your house."
"But you are my guest."
"Fine, but only for one night." I smiled triumphantly. I had won. I went to the bathroom to change before promising anything. I changed into my pajama's and set up a bed on the couch. I walked into my room to find him sprawled on the bed, watching TV. "Good night." I said.
"Night," he replied. I closed the door and went to the couch. I layed down and soon sleep found me.

Great! I love it! Can't wait to read more.1 I hope whatever your dealing with will get better and not worse.

It's not so much me as my friends. But hanks anyway! It was a really short chapter but it was all I could come up with for now. Love you guys who are baring with me!<3

Awwww, I love the story so far.