Poems by Mari-chan 歌学以てまり-ちゃん~!

Last edited by Mari-chan on Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:16 pm; edited 2 times in total

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based on the movie Koizora: Sky of love
One More Day

one more day of missing you,
thinking of good times is all i do.
If you were here just one more day
i'd stop playing dumb and beg you to stay.
I'd remember that day when we met at dawn,
didnt know how much you meant til you were gone.
But now we can never get back all of those days...
all of the happiness gone in a foggy gray haze
Just leave the red roses at your grave
it had to be you they couldnt save
i shall always stay right here,
there's no more to fear.
but you couldnt stay
just one more day
but please love
from above
hiro...

I like it! ^_^

thats really good! i like the rhyming sequence a lot!

Hand of the Tide

Across the land
and to the sea
by the shore in the sunset
is where i shall be
to watch and wait
in the hand of the tide
my feelings no longer
are going to hide.
Deeper and closer
to the ocean im drawn,
i wait for you here,
but you are all gone.
I watch and wait
with no more to hide
as i lay in my grave in
the hand of the tide.

woah, i got chills reading this one, its super-amazing.

The last one was sad. I mean, i can feel the message, which isn't only sadness. Maybe not sadness at all? Well, i really liked it.

Elements Of The Night

See the stars
and see nights Fire
gather round
all you vampyre.

to see the moon
and see nights Earth.
come celebrate your
vampyre birth.

see the sky and
feel the nights Air.
come, enter in your
goddess's care.

See your friends and
the Water of night.
the elements strength
is your own might.

See the good and
the Spirit of Nyx,
gather the candles,
and light their wicks!

Gather round to
hear the cries
cuz everyone
can hear your lies
in the
warming fire,
gentle breeze,
soothing water,
tall grand trees.
Since Nyx is always
there for you,
Dark Daughters and sons,
let your love be true.

(( right now im trying to get back as many of my poems as possible from the deep corners of my mind [*pfft* drama queen*] so if many of these are familiar, then you know why.))

this is one of the poems that i saved. luckily i sent it to a friend and iw was still in my email! it is also a koizora poem.

Close your eyes my darling dear
and dream a dream so fair,
because in your dreams you're always safe
and I will always be there.
Dream of me as i am now
as i make my way towards the sky,
please dont be sad cuz now i am safe
please be happy and do not cry.
to see your smile one last time
would let me leave with glee.
and would make me happy just as that day
when you said you would marry me.
remember how the river flows:
forward and doesnt look behind
I'll care for you as i always have
my Mika, sweet and kind.
Keep smiling my dear once i am gone
for this is my final good-bye
and i will watch over always,
from my new place in the sky
Close your eyes my darling dear
and drift into my care,
because in your dreams you're always safe
and I will always be there.

I'm Only Human

Im only human in this life
through all the pain and all the strife.
Marks, Betrayals, and all entire
as im marked into vampyre.

Hold me close my loving Nyx
The one who makes all of the picks.
Thank you for my new, dear friend.
we will stay close til the very end!

Sewing up the Pieces

I cant believe that I
trusted you for as long
as i did.
You were there for me
through it all:
the blood,the sweat,
and most importantly the tears.
You were the one who
knew all of my secrets.
the one that i could always go to.
I look back and think
"wow. I sure was dumb"
But i guess that was all
you could handle, right?
a best friend is just not
as important as
a status ranking on
social ladder.
now im "so out of your leauge."
but remember this:
when you are torn up and
left as trash at the bottom,
i wont be there to sew up
the pieces.

My Air

Please back off
leave me alone.
i see your hatred
i hear your tone.

Dont put all your
anger on me!
i cant feel my legs
so how do i flee?

I've done nothing wrong
so please be fair,
leave me alone and
stop Breathing My Air.

I spread my arms and call for thee,
come daughter of night! my dear Zoey.
I will care for thee and come what may,
come my daughter! my sweet Stevie Rae.
You can always come to rely on me,
my dear fire daughter, my fearless Shaunee.
I call to you, and your element of water,
Come to me Erin! my aquatic Daughter.
The one of my visions, mind-strong and mighty,
My seer, my blessed, my one Aphrodite.

ths realy good they all r

Arigatou gozaimasu!

Once upon
a happy time,
there was no evil,
there was no crime.

that was when
you were with me
now all is empty
like a fallen tree.

that one is kol

thankz!

no problem its the truth

Last edited by Heart_Stark on Sat Jul 18, 2009 10:36 pm; edited 1 time in total

Heart of Glass

heart of glass
so well defined
im in your hands
im in your mind

i am so fragile
i just might break
crushed apart
or pain and ache?

Nice poems... You people seriously make me want to restart my thread from ashes. Though I guess mine isn't as good that's all...

^dont think like that!

Well.. Thanks for the encouragement ^^

anytime!

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Poems by Mari-chan 歌学 以て まり-ちゃん~!

Poems by Mari-chan 歌学以てまり-ちゃん~!