a poem

OMG Rob these are great

it is true seriously you have talent

Rob get these published I am serious stop dabbling with this your quite great when it comes down to it

No way, I want nothing to do with that.

fine then keep posting them

yeah, yeah maybe

maybe Rob you better post more your poems are addicting

lol ok

*fragile beauty*

She sits alone in the hospital
Sitting on a bench in the garden
Making daisy chains on the grass
Lost in her own little world
Thoughts of love and betrayal
High hopes and disappointments
She looks haggard and drawn
Just plain and ordinary
Nothing special
And yet in her youth she was a beauty
All the boys love her
She was kind and generous
Friends with everybody
But she didn’t have a boyfriend
She waited for you
While you played the field
Seeking adventures in the long grass
Eventually you could resist no more
And you asked her out on a date
She was so happy
Pure and innocent
She dreamed of eternal contentment
She had finally met her Prince Charming
But you were no prince
You were nothing but a rogue
You took advantage of her
And moved on
To more fun and games
She pleaded for you to come back
You only teased and tormented her
And told jokes to your friends
She was heartbroken
Emotionally crushed
She dropped out of college
Her hopes and dreams shattered
Her parents were distraught
But there was no consoling her
She was admitted to hospital when she was 21
She drifted and lost touch with reality
After several years you had the courage to visit
Married with children
She didn’t even recognise you
And continued to play with her daisy chain
Still lost in her own little world

Oh Rob that is depressing

you said post more, so I did

yeah but it is a great poem but sad

if you think so

which I do

that was really good! i loved it.

OMg Rob keep it up

*Crimson blood and poison tears*
(I can't claim credit for writing this one, but i liked this poem and thought it should be shared with you guys so...)

Rain, rain, go away,
Because of you the pain will stay.
Slit my throat, cut out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.

Poison tears stream down my face,
My heart beats at a steady pace
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.

I don’t need you anymore…
Is what I think while tears pour.
I hate you like I hate my life;
But love is what cuts like a knife.

Love is death and death is you;
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson blood streams down my head
Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull…

...Now just a memory that’s faded and dull.

*the seasons change*

The long September evening dies
In mist along the fields and lanes;
Only a few faint stars surprise
The lingering twilight as it wanes.

Night creeps across the darkening vale;
On the horizon tree by tree
Fades into shadowy skies as pale
As moonlight on a shadowy sea.

And, down the mist-enfolded lanes,
Grown pensive now with evening,
See, lingering as the twilight wanes,
Lover with lover wandering.

Sweet~ Very nice flow. Simple, coherent. Beautiful. Really beautiful.

A nice, serene scenery created, only accompanied by two lovers (: Romantic :DDD

thank you

wow. that one is really good too. i love it!

that is so sweet not to mention dark it deserves this smiley

*in the dark*

As I turn the lights out and look at you
A grin is drawn on my face
Knowing that you don't know my night life
You think I am there by your side when you fall asleep
I'd rather you live that comfy lie
Than ever learn the truth

I am the bringer of death
To those that deserve it most
The ones who torment others for fun or sport
I turn their games on themselves and laugh as they cower
And on the final run that is when they learn my name
I am the not the beginning of the end. I"m what is left in their death

As my job comes to an end I run in the shadows
To make it back to bed
So That my secret can stay hidden
So you wake up with me by your side
As I sleep off my night shift
And you call me the best thing in your life