What'd you think of "Tempted"? *DO NOT read if you haven't read "Tempted"!*

the way he died was just sad..I felt bad for STARK! he was all hurt in the pride and left zoey and then that happened,like how was he feeeling!

i cried. ;O i felt so bad for Stark..

The guy did kinda have it coming, he left Zoey alone, even though he had the prior knowledge that Zoey "died" by herself and Kalona and Neferet were there

well c'mon she really hurt him so it wasnt his fault,but i cant help but feel bad for him

I didn't really like the ending. xD I mean, I was kinda glad Heath died but he didn't nessasarily have to get his neck snapped.

I know! That was so horrible!

When I read it, I was like, "Aw, crap!"

i was like" wha- aaw nooo...i was stariting to like him!"

Yeah I was the same, I didn't see that coming, but I was also happy.

When his neck snapped i could literay here this sound.. Horrible o.o I think more or less everyone was starting to like Heath again, and to have him die.. like that was terrible But on the bright side its one guy out of the equation?

I hope so anyway and I think Kalona is out of the picture too 'cause I don't think she'll be able to forgive him for what he did. So that makes Stark the only one left if Erik doesn't come back that is.

Yeah she saw him kill Heath. She shouldn't be tempted to go near him now.

I think your right, she wont be able to forgive him, they had been friends for AGES!

I know. I wouldn't have trusted him in the first place myself.

Neither would I. He is too up himself.
and just the general look about him :L

Yeah I wouldn't have trusted him either, though I love him.

He's a Forbidden Fruit.

Lol yeah I know.

You want, but you better not touch.

Lol I'm gonna touch anyway =)

i really didnt see the appeal Kalona have, it was the wings wasnt it? :p

Lol I dunno what it was, I just think he's cool.

I'll just say this alot of the times if guys have wings they're Hot!

OOOH! AGREEEED!

Its true