My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.

Guest

Okay here's one:

[never named]

Love a simple thing, painful as Death.
Death, may it wither your soul, as Life weakens it.
Life is full of many things and Pain is one in my hearth.
Pain is full of Nothingness, so I bid thee good as I go along, my Life.

I love it

Guest

thanks!

Guest

Another one: I wrote this for school and yeah

Children are waiting.
A fallen angel rises.
Their wait is over.

cool

Guest

It sadly didn't win a comp with little kiddies Crying

Guest

I wrote this because I just promoted this morning, from 6th grade and now 7th.

My Journey

My journey is over now.

I am released from my duties.

So I shall take a bow.

The sweetness of my past is like a plate of cookies.

Ask a question, how did I get here how?

So my story comes to an end, and a new path is laid out.

wow those are all really good XD

I love them

me too your really goodi wisj i was that good XD

dont worrie it just takes time and pacntse to figure them out.

Guest

I learned in like a month just yeah

Guest

Good-bye

Today was bittersweet
.For , I am leaving a place so dretched. ((Is that a real word?))
But I must leave you too.

The clouds are low and I feel meek.
What is a place that is so wretched?
All are leaving in twos.
(Unlike you and me.)

I must go but first, I must take a quick peek.
Good-bye my love and dretched place.

Now I feel so much sorrow,
it is unbearable.

But good-bye and good day.

wow thats sad and good at the same time.

Guest

thanks so my siggy, is a poem of mine )(Not the pic)(

I like it. You are doing great. I write good poems and long ones.

Guest

POETS UNITE!

lol ya.

Guest

HAve you even read my poems or not yet lol.

Guest

I shall right now! I read some.

hope theyare ok. some of them are prity dark some times.

Guest

and you can post on them if you like them.

Guest

I shall cause I'm awesome!

Angel of Death

As the sun rises,
My eyes shine.
I sparkle in the
sun. The Spark
of Death. I'm
With the Angel's.
The Angels of Death.

No one can Free me,
No one can See me,
All is left is me
in the sky with the
Angel's. The Angel's
of Death.

You may of Heard
me, but thats all.
I see you walking
to school. I see
you Sad. I Know
you miss me. I
write you those
notes, but you ingore
them. I'm with the
Angel's. The Angel's of
Death.

I follow you
every where you go.
You never see me.
you never hear me.
I can feel you sad.
I can hear that
you want to be
with me. But
I'm with the Angel's.
The Angel's of
Death.

I live longer than
you. These heart braking
years with out you.
I see your last mintues.
You sufering and dieing.
I wanted to save you.
But my fellow Angel's
held me back. I'm with
the Angel's. The Angel's
of Death.

As the sun sets,
I shine no more.
I dont sparkle any more.
The spark of Death gone.
I become the dangerus
thing at night. I'm with
the Angel's. The Angel's
of Death.

By:Sak

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