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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyMon Sep 13, 2010 1:05 am

Maybee. >.>
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Perfectly Flawed and Wonderfully Hated
i love that one and the one that says 'i hate daddy' and . . . ahh that cookie monster one

btw i also LOVEEEEE ur siggy picture! ahha . . . <3's for it! and u . . . ahha LOLLLLLZZ
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyMon Sep 13, 2010 10:36 pm

^^ Thankies~! x33

Wating For That Day

I'm waiting for the day,
When I'll stop acting.
No more smiles, no more love.
You and your Paramour.
I hate you not her.
That day where you hear.
"I hate you, and never loved."
You'll be so sad.
But I'll smile and move on.
Your so happy that I held your hand.
But all I did was think of music,
And let you do your thing.
I rejected all atemps at comuntication.
I said no to all ideas.
So shut your mouth and see,
we all hate you and want you gone.
So be your pompus,
But you have no money,
Take your Paramour.
Your pompus,
But so poor.
I hope you like to party as an old man,
With no money or love,
As you rot in hell.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyMon Sep 13, 2010 10:49 pm

You see this girl everyday.
Do you know her?
Or do you know the rumors?

She's got a nice face,
but so many rumors.
All rumors of being a whore.

Years later.
Everyone saw what these lies did to her.
You loved her, but never helped.

Now tapes arrive and you hear her story.
From her first kiss to her death.
How you were her Romeo for one night.

Now you sit there and let tears fall.
Over the girl you loved for years.
Now a new day.

The once popular.
Now on the verge.
You finally go and help a girl you love.

One word saves her.
When you finally say it.
"Skye."
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyTue Sep 14, 2010 10:57 pm

Am I alive?
Am I dead?
All the lines,
Thick like lead.
Can't see a thing,


What's it like to live?
What's it like to die?
Lost in hopes to be the other,
But kept by the lies.


I want to feel love, not hate.
What is hate? Love is tiring.
To enter the mind and heart,
would be an impossible dream.


And to never see love or hate,
to see life or death is a nightmare.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyWed Sep 15, 2010 1:28 am

Birthday
You see this feature.
And then the hater.
This creature,
Is a liar.

This shape is lurching,
In the darkness.
As your loving,
He creeps up, sorry for his latness.

Apearing out of nowhere,
The figure is here.
Fast as a hare,
big as a bear.

This thing will come.
Do you like it or not?
Sweet as a plum.
Big as a lot.

This is your birthday.
And here is your gift.
Take the ray.
and enjoy the lift.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyThu Sep 16, 2010 2:14 am

nice..describing the whole conceiving and giving birth i liked it.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyThu Sep 16, 2010 2:25 am

O.o Dude, I didn't think of making it about that.
Nice. xDD
I rhymed and got off topic it was kinda a hot air ballon in the end.
First a guy stalking a girl. xDD
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Anything Other Than That

This thing is walking alone.
Different from the others.
They are the drones.
She is one of many mothers.

To be different is impossible.
But at least to not be like them.
But she's so unlovable.
So much of a gem.

She wishes to be anything,
Anything other than that.
But her world is so limiting.
All she can be is a floor mat.

She was a beauty.
But then was raped.
Innocence was lost.
And hated she was.

So her story comes to an end.
As so does her life.
Her life was on lend.

She hung by her neck.
With her was a note.

I wanted to be anything but this.
But the whores ruined my life with rape.
So I hope you feel the guilt.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptySun Sep 26, 2010 1:08 am

The Things We Do

Cut your hair,
Put on makeup,
Change your style.

All these things we do for boys,
What's the point of changing?
Cause if they didn't want us as we were,
Then they were not deserving.

The things we do,
It's insane how much we change.
For just one simple boy,
When there are some better than him.

Don't bother to change,
Stay who you are.
Don't worry,
You'll find the one.

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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyMon Sep 27, 2010 6:52 pm

This is my longest yet. (A little over two pages.) I hope you enjoy.
Why
Left behind in the dust.
Not a soul around.
It’s a must,
Up the mound.
All the lust,
In us all, around a pound.

Where did you go?
Why was I left?
Used like a yo-yo.
I thought we were friends, well that’s it I thought.


Used for your game,
No more shall I see of that.
The knife feels wedged in deep,
I felt lame.
Maybe we misunderstood,
Don’t be an old bat.

But whatever I feel behind,
It may be you, it may be them.
But I want no more binding.
I’ll sew my own hem,
Just let me see into your mind.

This game is over,
Where’s the point?
Why talk at all?
There’s no point,
They hate me, all the same.

We were separated,
I miss you.
Do you miss me?
Meet me at the half point,
Under the willow tree.

Tell me,
What do you think?
I have become what you never wanted.
But I’m still here, healthy as a horse.
Will you say hello?
Hello to the new me?

Everyone. . .
All but you have accepted.
Even enjoy the new I.
My changes are great,
Much like the you I knew.

I am brighter.
Slightly optimistic,
lovable.
(Or so I’m told.)
But here I am,
Once and for all.

The greater me,
Do you like?
Or do you hate?
Tell me now,
Or leave me in the dust like before.

Your new friends,
I know they hate me.
So I shall never speak,
How sad you have driven me to my previous state.
This is the last straw,
I am done,
No more mind games.
I am who I am,
I’ll never change.
Like or Hate,
I do not care.
Just let me be,
Or you’ll never see.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyMon Sep 27, 2010 7:00 pm

^^ Since some of you don't understand my poems, how though? I mean, their straight forward. Anyway, I'll give you an annotation.

Backround: Ever since 1st grade I've had my friends come and go. My best friend Samantha from 1st-3rd grade kept coming and going. 4th grade was a smart girl Olivia, 5th and 6th grade was myself, in those two years I walked out on myself. And this year, my best asains Jayzle May and Jessa Mae. I know, I know friends come and go, but you see these were all my best friends kinda and all I really loved them.

So really the poem Why is me asking why they left, and how hated I feel. It's most to Jessa and Jayzle, since they tried to keep me from being emo and it kinda worked. But since they abandoned me I've been pretty bad. I'm still working an talking to them again but it's hard.

So thats it. . . errr.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyMon Oct 04, 2010 4:33 am

Ghosts and Seas

A huge vast sea,
Everything is boundless.
Find the key,
And you shall see.

Take a turn,
Take a trip why not?
The love is there you'll learn.
The ship, is old what a rotten lot.

As it twists and tips,
Many fall over.
The dead, oh what blue lips!

This feeling no way to describe.
No need to ryhme,
That's only harder.

I feel as the pilgrims felt on the boat.
Free, but still trapped in a sense,
Fear the witchs they did.
But the hated, are my escape.

Smooth as water,
Hard as a rock.
A crash comes,
The journey is over,
They have landed safely.
But what about mine?

This feeling is so unsettled,
Why though?
The memories they come back.
A flood, a flash.

A scream and pain.
What is this?
I see a young girl,
She's- she's screaming and crying.
Her father comes and yells harsh words,
It's only worse, the girl feels like it's gone all.

At night she would pack and run,
Never to come back to such abuse.
Just like the pilgrims she ran.
But now she was truly free from him, them.

So the pain subsides and I realized that was once me,
A young girl frightened of her own father, mother and brother.
Her life, and friends gone in a flash,
A flood of pain and tears, with that final blood curling scream.

It seems the girl's life was over,
That girl was me.
So am I dead?
Or did she live?
I guess I am forever a ghost,
Lost to all but herself.
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyWed Oct 27, 2010 10:23 am

Hey, you got into top three for the poetry contest, but not the winning entry.

You lost out because I was the judge. I've problems following through long poems. But as I can see it, it's a style of yours so there's no way you could change that. It's just a trait that makes your poems unique, as they always are.

The emotions are all in the lines, but you lost only because of the length and a little on the underlying meanings I guess. (because your poems are too long so it's not easy to have strong underlying meanings.)

Keep writing though!
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PostSubject: Re: My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff.   My long forgotten thread of poem like stuff. - Page 5 EmptyWed Oct 27, 2010 8:16 pm

Oof. Oh well. Close is good for me.
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