MoonDreamer's poems

Forbidden Love
Under the moon light darkness protects
the dreams of a lover that can't prevent
the disasters the future might bring
when he holds his lover under his wings.
Their love is forbidden
no soul, no demon can fall in love,
with the wings of disaster dancing above
in the skies of darkness they'll be crazy driven.
This love can't be consume,
if it does there will be no dark,
and there will be no light.
His love for her will bring up death.
Her love for him will bring up hell.

Haunted Lovers
Darkness is waiting in the middle of the night
to find its way to break apart
two lovers hearts that might tonight
consume their love under the sparkly light.

Alone with the departure
in silence the darkness await
to find the lovers and capture
the purest emotion between love and hate.

The sound of the beating hearts
distracts the hunters' hunger
and makes him wonder
"Am I ever going to have one?"

The hunter stops his hunting
and only finds that he's hurting.
The pain he feels is unbearable
which makes him breakable and vulnerable.

The hate he feels with his vulnerability
helps him make the fatal decision,
to kill the lovers with his finest ability
to destroy everything without compassion.

kewl

shallow grave wrote:

kewl

Thanks!!!

u welcome

So Divine
At night when everyone is asleep
I wonder around to see
if I can find an opportunity
to hunt you down while you sleep.

You look so peaceful, so alive.
I'm just a monster that can't survive
the light of the sun that will burn me alive.
That is why I hunt at night.

You smell so sweet, so divine
like wine and chocolate but combine.
A taste of your blood is all I ask
to calm down the monster I carry inside.

very nice

shallow grave wrote:

very nice

Thanks!!! I wrote it this morning, I was feeling kinda inspired! hehehehe!!!

One of my favorite poems of Edgar Allan Poe
Alone

From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were; I have not seen
As others saw; I could not bring
My passions from a common spring.
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow; I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone;
And all I loved, I loved alone.
Then- in my childhood, in the dawn
Of a most stormy life- was drawn
From every depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still:
From the torrent, or the fountain,
From the red cliff of the mountain,
From the sun that round me rolled
In its autumn tint of gold,
From the lightning in the sky
As it passed me flying by,
From the thunder and the storm,
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view.

You're talented. Beautiful works! Keep 'em coming ^^

Usui_Zero wrote:

You're talented. Beautiful works! Keep 'em coming ^^

Thank you!!!

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Lonely

Alone in my room I think of you
remembering the days that you were here.
But now your gone and all I fear
is that you will forget the love I feel for you.

But you left without a warning,
without telling me you were going to leave me.
My heart is bleeding and hurting
Is it because you dont love me?

Remember only just one thing
I loved you with all my heart and soul.
And now you left me all alone
in my room with all the hurting.

Time will pass and cure the pain
but now Im left like a doll in a corner,
all broken and wondering in silence
why everything went all wrong.

The last stanza is really beautiful. I love the two lines "but now I'm left like a doll in a corner, all broken and wondering in silence."

Missing you

I'm sitting here on the floor thinking of you.
I don't know the reason or why
but there are this felling I cannot hide.
I thought I could live without you
I thought I was strong
but I think I was dead wrong.
I can still feel your lips on mine,
feel the warmth of your arms
feel your body next to mine.
I know I did you wrong
for that I'm sorry
I thought that pushing you away I could protect you
but I was wrong.
Now I'm sitting on the floor thinking of you
making you feel my pain and sadness
because I cannot have you
and you are already with her.
Traped in her deadly arms.

they are all so good!

Beautiful poetry there!

I totally agree that there is no one better than the other.

Thanks!!! I appreciated
I have a few in spanish but not sure if I should post them
I'll try to translate them to English, lets see how they come out.

Just don't hide

The wind blows in the middle of the night
my heart is crying and hold up tight
my fears keep growing and I don't know why
my emotions are not clear neither right.

The thoughts in my mind are devastated
the unfaithful feelings are hesitated
the monsters in my head are going crazy
and my falling faith is already jaded.

Tears and blood are all around me
and dead people always surround me
My fears kept growing with the bloody valley
the zombies keep hunting my powerful alley.

My subconscious tell me not to cry
because only the weak cannot pass by.
You must be strong and mean by heart
because I will hurt you until you die.

United

Apocalyptic days are to come
when you see a Fallen Angel come along.
The night will feel all wrong
and darkness will overcome.

Creatures from hell will rise
to kill and rape everything alive.
To make us feel fall apart
and that nothing else can be done.

To kill them will be hard
but with us united can be done.
With the help of the elements they will fall
and with the bless of our Goddess that unit us all.

Last heart break

My wounded heart has die today
when I saw you run away.
In the distance I saw you with her
and now there is no where else to go.
You left me on the floor,
bleeding for your stupid love,
and now you come back for more
to humiliate me and leave me torn.
You cannot have my life.
I am already dead.
It slipped away when your love left,
leaving me in a puddle of water
stained with my blood.

Torn Apart

Such strong feelings that I hold inside,
they are driving me crazy buy I can survive.
The emotions this feelings bring
when I look at my finger and see your ring.

I love you and hate you all at the same time.
What the hell is happening that I can't decide?
You seem so sweet and so divine,
that makes me love you for eternal life.

But then again I feel this pain
that makes me hate you till the end of days.
It's something I can't describe
because it all started when I lost my mind.

I know what you're thinking, please don't get me wrong.
I love you and then I hate you, so I can't go on.
The ring that you gave me will bring my death,
if I keep this promise till the end.

I love just don't hide and last heartbreak, it feels really close to the heart and soul, got me teary when I read them.

Well, could be that I've came across such experiences but they really speak more than the words written.

As for the last poem you could use "Torn Apart" instead of torn between love and hate so that the title doesn't leak out the meaning of the poem.

But all in all, they ares till wonderful works.

Thanks for the advice

No prob!

You're indeed a great poet.

Thanks, I think you are a great poet too. hehehe