MoonDreamer's poems

Cool! Translate and share, if you don't mind!! My Spanish isn't good enough to use it as it!

What the crap is spanish?

WTF Bonehed!!!

LOL! I doubt he has never heard of Spanish, especially living is southern CA!

LOL I may be Mexican but hell will freeze over before I learn Spanish. Thank my parents for not teaching me when I was growing up, the crackheads.

ROLF

Bonehed wrote:

LOL I may be Mexican but hell will freeze over before I learn Spanish. Thank my parents for not teaching me when I was growing up, the crackheads.

LOL! Good to see someone knows what they do/don't want and stick to it, by God! LOL!

camara wrote:

Cool! Translate and share, if you don't mind!! My Spanish isn't good enough to use it as it!

Already translated the poem, needs fixing which btw im already on it.

LOL! Of course you are! You're dynamite, lady! Eagerly awaiting!

Sorry it took me so long to fix it after I translated, I was so caught up with my readings. LOL
Hope you like it!!!!!

The Beauty of the Circle

In silence the night sighs
watching the moon dancing with the stars.
At sea you can see the reflection
of the ritual that is about to start.

From the East the wind plays,
blowing hard and feeling almighty,
searching like that its way
to get to the ritual with agility.

From the South fire is burning,
leaving pureness all the way,
fighting all evil and building
new paths to begin a new day.

From the West the sea reaches
the sweet scent of fresh rain,
leaving behind all the sadness
washing our souls that way.

From the North earth is waiting
for the guests to come to this feast,
with perfumes of roses and lavender circling
to make us feel at ease and in peace.

Spirit completes the circle,
starting such desired event,
with love and wisdom tangled
happiness all over spirit radiates.

In silence the night sighs
watching the moon dancing with the stars.
Now it doesn't feel so lonely
because the moon has fill it with its life.

MoonDreamer, that is really lovely and it has nothing to do with me being prejudiced about calling the elements into a circle!!!

Really, it's very lovely. This one is one of my favorites, along with Stop Time, Magical Sunset, and So Divine. I like them all, but these are my favorites!!

Glad you like it!!!! I'm thinking if I should change the title of the poem, because that I re-read it is not convincing me. LOL

Go with your gut. There's nothing wrong with the name you have, but if it doesn't speak to you, then maybe you should change it.

I guess it explain itself. Hard times and nothing to fight for.

Good Bye

Caught in the middle of disaster
my heart started to ache.
The visions of the future I cannot capture
and all my dreams begin to fade.

So much that I hold inside
all your lies and time passing by,
knocking at the door every time we argue
holding nothing else but the things I value.

The pain I'll leave behind me when I'm gone
will help me go through it all the way
there is nothing else to say but so long
and wished that it hadn't end this way.

It's a beautiful poem, but one can tell the author has experienced some pain at one time or another. Very moving.

You have no idea!!!! I'm glad you liked it.

I certainly did. How long have you been writing poetry?

gosssh these are REALLLY GOOOD

Here is another poem that came to me yesterday after a solving a problem I had.

Nightmare

Once awaken can't go back to sleep
the demons around us will send him free.
The night will become a nightmare
with creatures never seen
and terror will be in our destiny.
To destroy him will be impossible
one like him had never been seen,
immortal powerful creature capable
to destroy life as fast as a blink.
Fear will rule the world,
no one will feel at ease,
all the sins around us
and like in hell we begin to live.

Interesting. Intense. That could be the backdrop for a horror novel! I like it, lady. And glad you solved your problem!

I'm glad you liked it!! Yeah it sounds that way, huh?

Yeah, but that's a good thing. It's cool!

Make more, looking forward to your wonderful works. (I thought you didn't need me to remind you to make them? XD)

MoonDreamer, have you given any more thought to organizing your work into book form?