MoonDreamer's poems

Well, just losing the feel I suppose.

ya it happens

yea IK

This poem is dedicated to all my friends here in the HON forum as well to my friends back home in Puerto Rico which I miss a lot. Hope you like it. (I wrote this one almost asleep)

Be brave and strong

Be brave and be strong
you know I will come along
to help you kill the pain
and watch the strength you gain.

Be brave and be strong
your monsters will come alone.
I will help you through this fight
and will give my life if I might.

But be brave and be strong
in life that's our number one goal,
so that you can kill the monsters and the pain,
so that all our efforts weren't in vain.

Beautiful~

Thanks, I just wanted to let you and all the people here in the HON that you can count on me.

This poem might not be as good as the rest but I've been having some lines in my head for a long time since Darius came to life in the HON series. Hope you like it, open for critics on what I should fix.

Darius

You are brave and you are strong
if you are around me nothing can go wrong.
You will protect me with body and soul
from all evil because that's your goal.

You look intimidating and dangerous,
you are like a mountain my dearest Darius.
You have all the qualities a Son of Erebus should have
because being a warrior is in your blood.

Kalona can rise and get me
but you will find me and rescue me.
Because you are my warrior and my love,
because we share a special bond.

You are brave and strong.
The biggest mountain of all.
You are the greatest warrior after Erebus,
you are my warrior, a Son of Erebus.

your a really good writer :]

Thanks!!!!

Wow. I'm moved. I love them.

hehe Thanks!

Darius is deffo my fave one. :33333333

Mine too, I think that's the reason why I wrote this poem.
I do like Erik and Stark but Darius has something special that makes him more attractive to me. Maybe because he is a warrior and you can picture yourself with him and feel protected and all. hehehe

For better

Walking down the road of deception
I caught a glimpse of you,
you hunt me even in my biggest depression
to see my heart break all the way through.

You care less for me
and it's not till now that I see
how empty and selfish you are
that it breaks even more my heart.

How stupid and foolish was I
that I believed all your lies.
And now you make fun of me
like I wasn't part of your life and will never be.

But even though my heart is aching,
mark my words it won't last for ever,
I will see you one day heartbreaking
and I promise you, it will be for better.

i love your poems. u are a great poet.

Thank you!!!!

Thanks, yea that first one if pretty intense, it reminds me of impossible love or that specific impossible someone you can't be with.

om my word, they're all amazing! Especially that last one

thank you!, I'm glad you like them.

@shadowmere

Nice poem in your signature. ^^

@moondreamer
Nice works so far! Keep up the good work.

Magical Sunset

Wraped in a blanket watching the sunset with you
I felt how all my dreams have come true.
Amazed by the view and the magic of the moment
I looked into your eyes and knew my heart by you was stolen.
Without saying a word you bent down and kissed me
breathless and panting you broke the kiss
to hug me and protect me from the freezing breeze.
I felt your hands caress my skin,
the perfect touch to make my head spin.
And then the magic of the sunset began to rise
when you said you loved me staring directly into my eyes.

Wow, I'm really impressed. I like each and every one but for different reasons. there's a lot of depth to your work and it's like I can feel what you were thinking when you wrote it. Are you compiling them into book form?

It seems we have yet another thing in common--a love of Darius. lol What a sweet, caring hunk!

Tell me about it!!!!
yea actually I am compelling them into book form who knows where my talent can take me.

You have a LOT of talent, my dear, and I'm interested to know what will come of your work. Keep writing--I love to read it!