MoonDreamer's poems

LOL, very lucky!!! It brings the best out of me, cant help it. But I'm grateful for the good feelings and emotions it brings, I must say that I'm the lucky one.

Excellent poem, not as good as Magical Sunset though. I agree with Camara, the object of those feelings is very lucky indeed.

Yeah I have to agree with them both, your poems are awesome! They are sincere and true.

Hey MD, remember when I was asking you if I could post your poems along with my stories in a particular website? Anyway, the website is this http://fanfiction.nyah.com.br and my user name is Rachel Cullen.

If you allow me I would love to put your poems there, of course I would post that it's yours!
What do you think?
PM me if you are interested!

Anywayn, Merry Christmas and an Excelent New Year!

This one came out of the blue, hope u like it!

Immortal enemies, eternally in love

Darkness has arrived
from a long and tiring day
to bring up my hopes
and the desire to live another day.

The stars comfort me,
shining from the skies above
knowing that I'll be watching them
from the same old spot.

The moon looks tired,
but still shinning bright.
She knows my love will be howling,
his love for me to the stars.

Our distances kills me,
more then a silver stake.
why cant a werewolf love a vampire
the same way he loves the moon?

Our love is against all law.
there is no way to keep us safe.
you will die protecting me
and I will kill those who do you harm.

Dawn is coming, killing my hopes again.
This lonely vampire is without her love,
without the sound of the beating heart of her werewolf,
in the silent of a sad and dying night.

Eww this one's really good.

MoonDreamer, I like that one a lot. I've read some books about love between different species like this, and they are very intense. Great job!!

Thank you!! I really appreciate that you guys tell me exactly what you think about my work. More to come really soon, I might as well post my first chapter, well that will be after Im done with it, lol, of my first novel. Im kinda inspired lately, lol

Yeah I liked it too! I think there should be a thing such as a love between enemies.
I mean just because one coven says its forbbiden u doesn't mean the love its not there right?
So yeah, really good MD!^^

MoonDreamer wrote:

Thank you!! I really appreciate that you guys tell me exactly what you think about my work. More to come really soon, I might as well post my first chapter, well that will be after Im done with it, lol, of my first novel. Im kinda inspired lately, lol

Bring it on, lady. It's about time!! LOL

And know that you can always count on my support and my honesty.

So Magical yet So Helpless
(Thanks Camara for the title)

Blessed by the gods
doomed by her faith,
and darkness awaits
to see her fall.

The night is crying,
the moon feels sad.
Her lover is in danger
and her arms are tied.

Everyone is watching
but nothing they do,
the poor man is dying
while she screams in pain.

No magic in the world
can help her untie herself,
her lover has died
and all she feels is pain.

Everyone is yelling at her "Witch"
but she doesn't care.
All she can see is darkness
and feel her heart beat for the last time.

Wow, another intense poem. Sounds like the makings of a short story. Good job!

It's really....idk, u wanna read on lol. You should make it in to a story.

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