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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:55 am | |
| I sure do hope it won't be dead again... Although I'll be away for quite some time, but I'll try to post once every week or so. Perceptional Sophistication
Duels of power, covert and secrete. Capsules of protection, built and bolstered.
Fables of friendships, bristle and prick. Tables of chimeras, shatter and pop.
Dimples of history, shallow and tarnished. Candles of alliance, dissolves and melt.
Girdles of living, cumbersome and woeful. Barrels of loneliness, tumble and crush. ~Ger.
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:56 am | |
| He Came
Sitting and waiting at a bench, praying he is still coming. She skips and paces around the car, just to keep her hopes alive.
Changing and darkening sky, despair is slowly eating into her, She flips and glances at the phone, wishing he would give her a call.
Hurrying and jogging over to her, the one she had been waiting for, She smiles and waves back at him, his grin has lit up her raining heart.
Jumping and rushing towards him, tears of relief pours out of her, she flings and wraps her arms round, squeezing the daylights out of him. ~Ger. | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:44 am | |
| Lonely
Call of the souls abandoned, shrills of the spirits forsaken, none heard by others on earth.
Scrapes of memories to pick, empty pages of future to seek, a present day barren living. ~Ger. | |
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:55 am | |
| Where's The Love
We claim we love, but to her, we do only harm.
We say we worry, but then, we just sit by and watch.
We talk of protecting, but right now, we're still destroying.
We discuss the measures, but in fact, we're just putting on a show.
We start campaigns, but actually, We're just spinning tales.
We have all the power, so it's time, we should start saving Gaia. ~Ger.
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![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 12345 Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know Join date : 2010-04-24
Character sheet Name: alyson Age: 16 Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
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| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Mon Oct 04, 2010 10:52 am | |
| Thanks. (: Good that someone FINALLY notices my writes. | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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Character sheet Name: Shell Age: 13 Affinities : Can control a persons emotions, and can see a persons hearts desire
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| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:27 am | |
| Lol. There's nothing quite than amazing about my writes. In fact, most of them are just random writes which i don't really spend a lot of time reviewing and editing to perfect them. Most of my writes, I just write and forget. | |
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Character sheet Name: Shell Age: 13 Affinities : Can control a persons emotions, and can see a persons hearts desire
![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:28 am | |
| they are still like really amazing and like realy good | |
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Oct 09, 2010 3:33 am | |
| Well.. my first poem took me 15minutes to write... but almost 3months to edit and review. That was how I first stepped into poetry. Other than random poems, most my collection are really just goth rofl. Beautiful Unreliable World
Crawled out of the shell, I had always hid in, hoping to learn new ways, and make new friends.
Just a little of what I'd say, is spun into a nice little tale, showing sides that I never knew, telling unfamiliar stories of me.
Has life got to continue on, in this bitter betrayal, where I only stand solitary, with many acquaintances.
Is this the wonderful world, where backstab never fails, to follow one who tries so hard, fighting inhibitions and fear?
This beautiful place we call home, where hope merely gets trampled on, and emotions are often toyed with, such life is too unreliable, no?
~Ger. | |
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| Going Solo
Bitter pills only swallowed, silent resentments just held back, none will see what's covered. Beneath this masquerade of plastered smiles, I am but a tempered, tattered doll.
Utilized by the faces known as friends, having marks leeched from clenched fists, frustrations are exceeding limits. Under this layer of insane exterior, I am but an alone, afraid soul.
Angsty that penetrates beings, lost in a abyss of clashing emotions, fury that can only burst veins under this skin. Behind this expressionless mask, I am but a haywired, erratic living.
Invitations to a black parade, faces of perplexed expressions, just another piece to add to their trash. Outside this intricate mind, I am but a forgotten, behind the scenes helper. ~Ger. | |
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| Near Me Not
Hidden away, behind a half-smile, shadowed away, under a cloak of darkness. None will see my shattered pieces, few will know my draping emotions. Leave me alone, leave me be, for it only hurts the remains of my pride. ~Ger. | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| Just Swallowing On
Captive of fear, I scream and shrill, but where only I can hear.
Lover of endurance, I hold and surpress, injuring no one but only me.
Prisoner of utilization, I work for eternity, facing only disparages.
Seeker of peace, I speak not of what I feel, for conflict only frustrates me. ~Ger. | |
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![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 12345 Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know Join date : 2010-04-24
Character sheet Name: alyson Age: 16 Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
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| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *PrincessOfDarkness* Trying to stop war
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Character sheet Name: alyson Age: 16 Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:58 am | |
| you should check mine outt xDD | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Burning Life of a Motionless Doll
The gentle smile sewn unto this face, beauty in only the limit of its length. A sparkle from the glittering eye, genuine despair hidden by it's barren gleam. The braided plaits of silk straight strings, dullness to come with time and space. A constant whirling network of thoughts, fostered by a dead heart and silent mind. ~Ger.
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| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Debris
Her arms once warmly wrapped around, now her pretty face only dons on scorn. Watched her twirl, but with other men, the smile once his, no longer now.
Maybe she was waiting for today, to show how he was yards from her. Staggered to a corner, destroyed by sorrow, fall into a vault of despair, devoured by despair. ~Ger. (something that happened to my senior... sad life) | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *PrincessOfDarkness* Trying to stop war
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![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 12345 Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know Join date : 2010-04-24
Character sheet Name: alyson Age: 16 Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Oct 10, 2010 3:53 am | |
| i like emm, ![Smile](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_smile.gif) | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| Erik's Heartache
Promised you'll always love me, Said I'm the only one you see, but your love's only that of a pea.
You tore me into shreds, left me hanging by a thread, ignoring the tears I've shed.
My soul that's all worn, my heart that's all torn, Stuck in this life I mourn.
You'll never see my tears You'll never know my fears I'm counting down the years. ~Ger.
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| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| I'm But Weak
All of the things, not one went my way, I'm doomed for life. Joy seems far, happiness kept at bay, this pain is sharp as knife.
It's dark, I'm in pain, I've only myself to share woes with. I've tried, I've struggled, the light seem to far away.
Self-encouraging, self-entertaining, self-motivating, those were just acts of a foolish girl trying stay sane. But all these agony, but all those grief, they are just too real to be myths.
I fear to close my eyes, I fear to die, tomorrow seems so cloudy, tomorrow seems so grey. 'I'm healthy, I'm fine', that's just another lie, just let me go, just let me leave, I've lost the last ray.
For I'm only trouble, for I'll only disgrace, if I were to follow, so despise me, so hate me, that way, I won't feel as bad.
Don't look back, don't bother, even if you know I'm depressed, Leave me behind, forget I ever existed, at least I won't be a burden to you.
~Ger. | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| Cobwebs
Spot lights on the dance floor, wine and drinks in rows. Swirls of dresses, taps of heels, wrath of midnight parties, blasting through.
A pallid single palely dressed, forgotten in shadows of dim-lit sites. Head in knees, hand round glass, many merry hours, wasted in grief.
Distant melodies misbegotten in pain, struggle to stay sane fails to being. Tears streaming, hics choking, few would know, none will ask. ~Ger. | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | ~*Fire*~ Mod
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| I love your poems hunii, they're amazing and truely deep. KEEP WRITING!! | |
| ![Go down](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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![My Lousy Scribbles Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Tue Oct 12, 2010 7:09 am | |
| [Critics are totally welcomed for this. The worse you deem it be, the better (: I know it sucks, This was my first attempt at song writing, so it'd be good if someone could point out errors to change.] Fading Away
The sand is drainning out, time is passing fast, everyone's moving on but... Maybe I'm just warped by fear, probably my inhibitions, or rather just my desperations, yearning to return to those years, where things were as we see, no lies, no silent wars, no bitter resentments...
Fingers and the keyboard, letters typed and deleted. Behind an energetic face, a weary soul is struggling. Thoughts that can't settle, sanity that is being tested, things are going awry.
Chatting friends seem so warm, like nothing in the world's wrong. But beneath that smile I see, sinister thoughts are running The skin they scratch, surfaces they touch, it seems just enough for them, but...
The sand is drainning out, time is passing fast, everyone's moving on but... Maybe I'm just warped by fear, probably my inhibitions, or rather just my desperations, yearning to return to those years, where things were as we see, no lies, no silent wars, no bitter resentments...
I held on the last bit of hope, the last ray of joyful remembrance, but it was just foolish of me... I could never have gone back, nothing ever reverses its ways, I am only left with these memories, pretty little fabrications of the past, with nothing but longingness to savour....
The sand is drainning out, time is passing fast, everyone's moving on but... Maybe I'm just warped by fear, probably my inhibitions, or rather just my desperations, yearning to return to those years, where things were as we see, no gossips, no unheard conflicts, no victims of prejudices... no lies, no silent wars, no bitter resentments... Those days are just too far away....
-Ger. | |
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