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*~Dreamer~*
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:04 am | |
| you mean shakespeare? yeap. i admire his ability. he was famous before he died, which is pretty rare for people who excelled in the arts stream (literature or visual art) | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:40 am | |
| Sweet Haven
The tooth that is sweet,
loves what is flavoured,
citrus, berry, chocolate, whatever!
Watch them roll and chop,
roll and chop, roll and chop.
Then, into bottles they do fall!
Rocks against glass,
opaque in transparent,
it can't be any clearer!
Once its mouth opens,
out goes the sugars,
one, two, three, and all are gone!
The teeth that are sweet,
loves every kind of candies,
melon, milk, soya, or anything!
It is time to take your pick,
consider not too carefully,
because you can always take another!
~Ger. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:31 am | |
| Dilemma
If study groups equate booze friends,
then choices of working partners are no more,
and grades must have aquaintances so!
Thus do we select with care and with wit,
to whom we stay loyal and committed,
and participate whole-heartedly.
Nay shall we work for friendship,
but with whom can serve us better,
and encourage us to return their favours.
Why should we be put down by people
for such acts of rightful actions,
just because it will be unfair to others?
And so, to whom is it fine,
or who is to choose it outrageous,
and whom will find it just enough to be fair?
Quick-witted choice of the mind,
or a stead-fast decision by heart --
the very question in need of our perceptions.
~Ger. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:36 am | |
| And Now I Die
Silence quietening down,
blackness enveloping roun',
Fear penetrates skin,
more than enmity
that diffuses out.
Emptiness aggravates...
deeper, further, darker,
I am but gone away...
Into the dying light
of the twinkling stars...
Like them, I'm but
a ball of fire
that's slowly dwindling
in brightness,
as I devour myself...
to bring forth light,
that serves no purpose...
The nameless many,
forsaken, forgotten.
~Ger. | |
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Amber Rae
Sending for Water from the West
 
Age : 27
Posts : 3302
Join date : 2011-06-14
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Name: Kareanna
Age: 17
Affinities : air, fire, water, earth, spirit
| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:45 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:22 am | |
| i'm sort of used to the idea of being dead. i feel lifeless all day. /shrugs/ | |
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Amber Rae
Sending for Water from the West
Age : 27
Posts : 3302
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Name: Kareanna
Age: 17
Affinities : air, fire, water, earth, spirit
| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:24 am | |
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*~Dreamer~*
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:25 am | |
| exams, tests, everything. my final year exams are coming in a months time (less than that actually). and i'm scoring lousy marks that getting into the school i want is just a mere dream.
and then on both sites i join, my thread is just dead. with my own writes echoing in the darkness of the barren abyss. quite black much? even the background is black. | |
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Amber Rae
Sending for Water from the West
Age : 27
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Name: Kareanna
Age: 17
Affinities : air, fire, water, earth, spirit
| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:27 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:31 am | |
| and btw, about your signature, i don't think there's anything wrong being an emo. there must be a point of time in life in which we were once an emo. because without that stage, you cannot truly understand life. it is essential as air is to the living -- it is a transitional stage for us.
and i still do have a hint of emo too, just that i hide it behind a mask of mirth and joy most of the time. don't like people asking about it. they like to poke their fingers and dig it right into the core and worst of all, the core is the heart, the already tattered heart. | |
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Amber Rae
Sending for Water from the West
Age : 27
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Name: Kareanna
Age: 17
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:32 am | |
| yea but i embrace it bc its who i am | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Oct 09, 2011 1:00 am | |
| Anorexia
The perfect shape
she only desires.
Already 48 at 168,
yet fats doth she squeeze.
'Make not yourself a weapon,'
her lover whispers,
'for you aren't my spaniel,
but a pillow filling I.'
Not long before she lay
remorseful in bed,
watching her beloved
only weeping in dreams.
~Ger. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Wed Dec 14, 2011 5:57 am | |
| My Island Home
-Dreamer
Black checkers behind glass,
able to prevent accidents
but not men who dream of flying.
Before these metal grills I stand,
wind whipping hair and rain
into the parted lips of my agape mouth.
I feel and all that I do feel,
is but the beauty of the sea,
that is so far yet so close to me.
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:58 pm | |
| The black, the white, and the transparent
-Dreamer
From beneath the green were
brick-red earth retrieved,
mounting hills beside a uniformed rectangle.
Slowly lowered into it,
an elaborately designed box,
in which an old carcass laid,
silent, and very much asleep.
Years of negligence brought forth regrets,
alongside the heaviness of the parade,
agony finally permeates the suited man.
And doh~ here doth she come!
Swish-swosh, the heavily embroidered ends in the wind,
weeping away her happy smiles that love should hold,
held by her beloved, in a muddied wedding dress.
Light beckoning it to step within,
A single tear of relief gives way as it fades,
Swallowed by the brightness unseen to human eyes. | |
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FallenInLove
Trying to break up a fight
 
Age : 31
Posts : 1630
Location : sitting in a corner, crying, wishing I could be in your arms :/ </3
Join date : 2011-11-29
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Name: Michelle Wherry (before marking: Allison Jackson)
Age: 15
Affinities : Air, Fire, Water, Earth, Soul, and can feel when people close to her are injured
| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Fri Dec 16, 2011 12:05 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Fri Dec 16, 2011 4:28 am | |
| Thank you! that's encouraging! | |
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Lashaya
Freaking out
 
Age : 30
Posts : 51
Location : Cαтcнιɴɢ ѕтαr'ѕ ιɴ ɴeverlαɴd
Join date : 2011-05-20
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Name: Lissa
Age: 17
Affinities : Earth.air,water,fire. get your life story by one touch
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:45 am | |
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Allyson
Accidentally causing an earthquake with Earth
 
Age : 34
Posts : 900
Location : in my own wonderland <3
Join date : 2010-04-18
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Name: Allyson
Age: mommy age :)
Affinities : Dreams
| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:21 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:26 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:19 am | |
| New Now
Leave me alone in my woes
don't bother me any longer
I have a sane mind
need not your concern
I don't care how much you love
cause after all those years
I know better... Better not to
Cause~
It hurts me too much
it pains me too far
I dare not close my eyes
don't wanna leave this world
Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark
I have to let you go
just wanna live on with life...
Just this way...
Unsure what you think 'f me,
can't care less for it anyway
I,me,mine,you,yours,life,
nothing you do harms me anymore
Fialing arms, waverin' hearts
no more of all that from today
cause they're all of the past
can never wound me again--
Cause~
It hurts me too much
it pains me too far
I dare not close my eyes
don't wanna leave this world
Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark
I have to let you go
just wanna live on with life...
Just this way... Without you...
~Instrumental Interlude~
Did you think I would turn back
return to your side
and hold you in my arms
with sacred tears flowing down my checks?
Did you think I would stop in my tracks
when I hear your voice
in a dead-man's alley
as if in hallicination?
No more of the pain, no more to be gained
all's lost in dust, all's gone and rust
won't think a second more of the aftermath that wore,
I won't have myself wearing my youthful wealth,
bound and chained to this pitiful life.
Cause~
It hurts me too much
it pains me too far
I dare not close my eyes
don't wanna leave this world
Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark
I have to let you go
just wanna live on with life...
Just this way...
~Short instrumental interlude~
It's too much for me
it's too far for us
I dare not think so high
don't wanna be locked behind
Just like this Oh~
You shouldn't have came
we should have just brushed passed
shoulder to shoulder, presence to each other
unaware~
[Lets' live life from now... Just like that...] | |
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nightstar
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 89
Location : U.S.A
Join date : 2011-10-31
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Name: Sky
Age: 14
Affinities : Water,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:10 pm | |
| Woah All Your Poems Are Really Good!! =) I Can Relate To Them Physical & Emotional... I Can See Your Pain..I Hope You Doing Better Or At Least Fell Better Somehow... KEEP Writing! Please Your Poems&Songs Insipre Me In Many Ways. I Hope To Hear From You Soon =)
My Favorites(In No Order) Our
I'm But Weak
Autumn Without You
But
Sympathetic Helpless Onlooker
People Change
Love You All the More
Far-away Mountains
& Rather Nightmares | |
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*~Dreamer~*
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 17, 2011 10:59 pm | |
| Thanks loads! It's nice to know people appreciate your work (:
I will, it's my way of expressing myself afterall >< | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Dec 18, 2011 2:02 pm | |
| This is the edited version of the most recent song. I've got the score written (it's lousy I believe). New Now
-Dreamer
Leave me alone in my woes
don't bother me anymore
I am sane enough to control
need not your tormenting concern
I don't care how much you love
cause after all these years
I know better to not to
Cause~
(Chorus)
It hurts me too much
it pains me too far
I dare not close my eyes
don't wanna leave this world
Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark
I have to let you go
just wanna live on with life...
Just this way
Unsure what you think of me,
can't care less for it anyway
I,me,mine,you,yours, ours, life,
nothing you will harm me more
Fialing arms, waverin' hearts
no more of all that from today
they can never wound me again
Cause~
It hurts me too much
it pains me too far
I dare not close my eyes
don't wanna leave this world
Oh~
You shouldn't leave a mark
I have to let you go
just wanna live on with life...
Just this way... Without you...
~Instrumental Interlude~
No more of the pain, no more to be gained
all is lost in dust, all is gone and rust
won't think anymore of the heart and core
can't have myself wearing youthful wealth
Cause~
It hurts me too much
it pains me too far
I dare not close my eyes
don't wanna leave this world
Oh~
You can't leave a mark
have to let you go
just wanna live on with life...
Just this way
~Short instrumental interlude~
It's too much for me
it's too far for us
I dare not think so high
don't wanna be locked behind
Oh~
You shouldn't have came
we should have just brushed passed
shoulder to shoulder, presence to each other
unaware~
[Lets' live life from now... Just like this...]
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| | Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sun Dec 18, 2011 2:05 pm | |
| [empty]
-Dreamer
Fountains of inspirations
shrivelling dreams
Rivers of creations
dried up hopes
Oasis of desires,
despairing sights.
Sea of possibilities
sunken lives. | |
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