My Lousy Scribbles

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:23 pm

Can't You
-Dreamer

Leave me alone,
let me be.
Stop bothering,
quit caring.
It's not like I'm dying,
or unable to do these.
Able-bodied, sane mind,
stop acting like you're all so nice.
I've had my share,
and you yours too,
lets' just end it here,
and forget it ever begun.
We were not made to be,
and never in the future too.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:20 am

Really good!!! write more!!!!

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Tue Dec 20, 2011 6:30 am

Thanks (: I will

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Fri Dec 23, 2011 2:35 am

A/N: In my country, there isn't snow. We only have monsoon season and dry season. Now's december, and this is what I see almost everyday:

Misty, blur, faded,
sheets, curtains, buckets of rain,
The Monsoon Season.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:00 am

24 colours Hatsukoi no Palette

Splashes of colours on a blank canvas
as our lives entwined
Spreading and permeating the surface
as we come closer

A/N: this is a write based on the manga of the same title.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:05 am

Red

Red, as striking as neon signs
marks the beginning of love.
Kisses, wines, and affection,
the blood racees through its stream.

Red, as searing as 'STOP' signs
marks the halt and end of it all.
Romance, roses, and rubies,
All's the same colour at start or end.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Mon Dec 26, 2011 6:49 am

Different

Pretty girl
heart of gold
Pretty soul
In need of love

Unlike me
came a dictator
Yet i'm here
Feeling a whole new world.

Our meeting
was planned by God
Our interests
were perfectly matched

I can feel myself changing
moving to this tune
loving this new life

Coming together right now
wanting to know more
digging deeper down

It feels good to be with you.

(a random short song that I came up with for a roleplay.)

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:42 pm

Until The Day

[And I thought we can be
with you standing beside me
into the future we will see
no fear even if we're lost in the sea
as our 'me' becomes 'we'
until the day you bedded another she]

Your hand in mine as we walked
In the gardens amongst nature
me listening to your story as you talked
Out with distance as love near

Our hearts entwined like our fingers
as fresh roses began to bloom
Those strolls began to grow longer
when my heart spared you room

And I thought we can be
with you standing beside me
into the future we will see
no fear even if we're lost in the sea
as our 'me' becomes 'we'
until the day you bedded another she

Once from strangers to lovers
but all have fallen apart
Then were we laughing together
and now we're back to the start

Watching your arms around her
T'was me and you back then
Feeling your heart stray from here
It is only tears that it sends.

And I thought we can be
with you standing beside me
into the future we will see
no fear even if we're lost in the sea
as our 'me' becomes 'we'
until the day you bedded another she

[Bridge]
All these feelings tolling on me now
can't get them off my chest
I want to flea from this place now
hide myself in some other world

And I thought we can be
with you standing beside me
into the future we will see
no fear even if we're lost in the sea
as our 'me' becomes 'we'
until the day you bedded another she

Guest

Your last song (^^^) was really amazing! The lyrics were gorgeous, but it sounds more like a poem. Maybe it's because I can't 'hear' the tune the lyrics go with. But, regardless, it was amazing! Keep writing <3

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Wed Dec 28, 2011 2:02 am

true. I am not good at coming up with melodies. I always fit melodies into the lyrics and end up screwing up my lyrics altogether. But I noticed that songs that are easier to sing and sound nice usually have more rhymes, which is basically what makes up a catchy poem. I can do an acapella for it if you want?

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Wed Dec 28, 2011 2:25 am

Start Today

The havens dictated you
to come and suffer through
From windows have smiles flew
To you, You life is all screwed

But think again dear friend
you do get enough food
Even in the bleak darkness
there must be some good

So just move on from today
start a fresh page every day
Don't care, just think of a way
to keep grievance by the bay

Some day God will send a man
to lead you to another land
so don't worry, just take my hand
never should you stop and stand

Try not to review your past
imagine a better tomorrow
Best not to dig up rusts
grab every minute, don't let it go.

Battle all the dark and bane
pick yourself up when you fall
There's a rainbow after rain
Even you can break the walls

So just move on from today
start a fresh page every day
Don't care, just think of a way
to keep grievance by the bay

Some day God will send a man
to lead you to another land
so don't worry, just take my hand
never should you stop and stand

[Bridge]
You may not have much
but you have life
It can be a painful march
but you can strife

So just move on from today
start a fresh page every day
Don't care, just think of a way
to keep grievance by the bay

Some day God will send a man
to lead you to another land
so don't worry, just take my hand
never should you stop and stand

This poem was written in response to Moonwalker12's collection of writes.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Wed Dec 28, 2011 7:39 am

A Tale of Mystery

Novel stories so mystical
almost fake but real
all the lives you have lived

By logs, by rocks and by water,
you came, spoke, and left
leaving my curiousity to grow

And when the last story was told
you answered my biggest qualm
and took this life from between my fingers.

And so in my life lives yours
but just unknown to me
until the day I started seeing you...

A/N: This is the original story. Mine's somewhat a quick summary of the story. It's really cool. You should check it out Very Happy

I'm not sure if she turned on the anonymous reviewing, but if she did, do leave her a comment!

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Thu Dec 29, 2011 2:15 am

Lynn

Even though I don't really know
why you would help me so
but since we're in this now
your hand I'll take and follow

Although I still tear for history
imagining all that could have been
I won't want to go back in
because I have you with me

Even when darkness comes around
the fear that once would bound
has all vanished to the ground
because it's you I have found

Back then I was just too young
didn't think you were true when we bunk
believing its only words from the tongue
nothing much really rung

Until today I finally do see
what all these were meant to be
It's like you gave me a key
and we became best buddies

[Bridge]
Just a random paper of written words
but is enough to soothe the hurt
Just a short mail about a day you lived
yet it reads to me so massive...

Back then I was just too young
didn't think you were true when we bunk
believing its only words from the tongue
nothing much really rung

Until today I finally do see
what all these were meant to be
It's like you gave me a key
and we became best buddies

So even if we end up in different places
and we are bound to meet new faces
I will never forget your traces
because you brought forth changes

And I hope we can stay friends forever
I don't want to loose you ever
you really made me so much better
with you, nothing can seem bitter

A/N: This is written to my best friend, although I haven't been in contact with her much recently cause she's working, but she's like a precious gem God has sent to me. She's like the only one whom would spend time to comfort me (and the only one who really hits the nail on the head) and the only one who would crazily ask to meet me out at 12am just because she couldn't sleep.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Thu Dec 29, 2011 11:47 am

Power Girl

Smiles and laughter greets your day
all the darkness seems at bay
Your words hold sunshine rays
catching even all the strays

It feels weird but still comfy
when I sit with you for tea
feels like where I should always be
a world with you and me

What powers do you hold
that made you warm in cold?
Even your silence can console
do you know you are gold?

You open what is folded
and guide it to a road
Do you really not know
that you've the power to mold?

Like a potter made of clay
joy and fullness comes my way
when I hear a word you say
even if it was recorded from that day

Even the rain is sweet and gay
where you and I were to lay
Even if clouds are low and grey
with you, I'm never in dismay

What powers do you hold
that made you warm in cold?
Even your silence can console
do you know you are gold?3

You open what is folded
and guide it to a road
Do you really not know
that you're able to mold?

This is how our worlds collide
I want to take you on a ride
I can put down all my pride
if you take my hand and be my bride

Even if I grew up cast aside
with all my dreams denied
you're enough to erase all derides
for all the pain'll be been untied

What powers do you hold
that made you warm in cold?
Even your silence can console
do you know you are gold?

You open what is folded
and guide it to a road
Do you really not know
that you've the power to mold?

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Tue Jan 17, 2012 2:52 pm

Intricate Art

Plates of reflecting light:
then you see me, now you don't.
I move - in soundless flapping,
and show you what life is,
when all the pieces making me
are but things never alive.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Tue Jan 17, 2012 2:54 pm

Amongst the Stars

Alone amongst the chains and woods,
above the clouds and beneath the hood,
in a realm where life exists in planes
and here I sit: a lonesome half-insane,
to this that I'm loosely bounded,
looking down, down, down.

A/N: Image credits to deviant art's: -xetobyte.

Subject: Re: My Lousy Scribbles Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:45 pm